Yes, I WILL...!
5-7-5 syllable Motivational poetry to reach the zenith4 total reviews
Comment from ElegantButler
Nothing is entirely beyond possibility. If you want to make a building, start with a brick. If you want to make a universe, start with a sofa.
And remember, where there's a will... there is a bunch of relatives about to get a boot to the head.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Nothing is entirely beyond possibility. If you want to make a building, start with a brick. If you want to make a universe, start with a sofa.
And remember, where there's a will... there is a bunch of relatives about to get a boot to the head.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Very well said Elegant. I appreciate your knack of going deep through the words and understanding the real essence behind them. Thanks you so much for acknowledging the poem.
Comment from mrskristinball
Motivational and thoughtful poem with a message that encourages hope for a "someday" success...Your form of the 5-7-5 is with words instead of syllables; which confused me at first because your first line has 10 syllables; I then realized you wrote the first line with 5 words, second line with 7 words and so on. Unique choice for your poem's form and style.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Motivational and thoughtful poem with a message that encourages hope for a "someday" success...Your form of the 5-7-5 is with words instead of syllables; which confused me at first because your first line has 10 syllables; I then realized you wrote the first line with 5 words, second line with 7 words and so on. Unique choice for your poem's form and style.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thank you mrskristinball for taking time and going through the piece of writing. Apologies for the confusion caused. You are correct I opted for the 5-7-5 word form of writing. Hope this small piece serves as a motivational thought for many of us like-minded people around. Thanks once again!
Comment from Ducorse
I like the poem but the syllable count if off for a 5-7-5 contest. My understanding is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.
A great read.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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I like the poem but the syllable count if off for a 5-7-5 contest. My understanding is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.
A great read.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thanks Ducrose!. I absolutely second your confusion. However, the idea behind is just to serve as a piece of motivation and encouragement. Thank you so much for understanding the main gist behind it.
Comment from NomadicFractal
The title of the poem is a great choice. I believe a better choice for the first line would be "to realize your aspirations TODAY" to go along with the title.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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The title of the poem is a great choice. I believe a better choice for the first line would be "to realize your aspirations TODAY" to go along with the title.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thank you NomadicFractal for liking the Title of the Poem. I duly respect your belief of tagging it as "TODAY". The notion behind keeping it "SOMEDAY" in the first line was, since every individual has some or the desire he looks up to achieve in near future he has to get up "TODAY" and make a strong "WILL" that yes no matter what it takes I Will achieve it if not 'TODAY but "SOMEDAY".
