Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Hi there, I wanted to check into your site as you had reviewed one of my poems. Welcome to Fanstory. I enjoy your poem 'Little Stream'. It meets a free verse form perfectly. I loved how the stream has a goal, it can travel gently or very energetically, no matter how far its goal. Determination is a good thing. Keep writing, Carolyn

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thanks

reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thanks

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Silvlerstar, I see you are new to fanstory, so this is why I am not marking you down. You will catch on quickly how to count the syllables in the 5-7-5 poems. Already you sound very poetic without the proper count of the syllables. So I look forward to your work here on fanstory, and by the way welcome. Mary

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks a lot for your comment!

Comment from amada

Excellent

I give it a 5 for the effort. Even if the syllable count does not fit the requirements, the imagery is fluid and poetic. I could understand entirely the tale of that little stream. Inspiring. Welcome to fanstory.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013

Dear Amada, thanks you for your guidance and comments for me.

Comment from PerkPerkins

Excellent

Great imagery and vision. Especially considering the limits of the contest. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other work. Well done, keep at it.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013

Thank you for your comment .Next time if you have chance please give me comments and guidance for me.

Comment from Sueellen11

Average

My friend,, you have entered a good entry,, but unfortunately your syllable count is a bit off,,the contest requirements is to write a 5/7/5 poem,,, but my friend,, you have 28 syllables,,, it is a good attempt,,, but unfortunately it does not meet contest requirements,, to enable you to correct your syllable count,,,down load the syllable counter,,, it will help you greatly with these styles of poetry,,,sadly this time I can only give a 3 star,,, and that is for a good effort,,and having a go at the contest,,,blessings,,,sueellen

Here is a copy of your syllable count so you can see,,,,
And maybe adjust your poem to meet the contest requirements,,,
Counter Results
Syllables: 28
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A
Words: 16
Characters
(all | no spaces | with spaces): 121 | 88 | 104 (Sequential spaces are not counted)
Lines: 3 (Including empty lines)

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2013

Thank you so much for your good guidance and comments for me.

reply by Sueellen11 on 30-Sep-2013

My friend,,, when you fix it message me and I will review again and adjust your rating,,, blessings, sue

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This 5-7-5 Poetry contest entry is perfect in syllable count and meets the requirements of the contest in a thoughtful way. It is a hopeful message of going until you can no longer. Nice. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

Thanks for your comment.

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

Thanks for your comment. Your comment is as for me as like Vitamins!

Comment from Charlene0513

Average

This short 5-7-5 poem needs to be re-edited as it does not follow the requirements.
You have an 8-13-5 syllables; you need only 17 syllables.
but good try.
Charlene

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

Thanks for everything.

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

Thanks for everything.

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013

Thanks for everything.