The Ballad of Mint Julep
A Country Song44 total reviews
Comment from joneau2
Wow, this is one excellent work. I enjoyed the imagery, the attempt at becoming a friend. And in the end, it was there all along ... the one and only true friend. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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Wow, this is one excellent work. I enjoyed the imagery, the attempt at becoming a friend. And in the end, it was there all along ... the one and only true friend. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a sad story with a somewhat happy ending. You got the one who really loved you, the dog. The dog knew what was good and what wasn't. She wanted you to get out of a bad relationship. Cheating with your best friend, that's harsh.
I hope that part is where the loosely part comes in.
The poem flows well. The rhyme scheme and line lengths pull you through the story.
Good picture. The dog looks sad and thoughtful.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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This is a sad story with a somewhat happy ending. You got the one who really loved you, the dog. The dog knew what was good and what wasn't. She wanted you to get out of a bad relationship. Cheating with your best friend, that's harsh.
I hope that part is where the loosely part comes in.
The poem flows well. The rhyme scheme and line lengths pull you through the story.
Good picture. The dog looks sad and thoughtful.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 13-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the stars and words of encouragement. Much appreciated.
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No problem.
dragonpoet
Comment from songbyrd
well I love country songs..I just wrote one last night..This is really funny but has a good storyline to it..those cheating songs can come from some of the craziest scenarios.. Good job..
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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well I love country songs..I just wrote one last night..This is really funny but has a good storyline to it..those cheating songs can come from some of the craziest scenarios.. Good job..
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your time and your stars.
Comment from barkingdog
Minty knew the truth. The woman was unfaithful. I guess Minty got the man all to herself-bones, socks and playing fetch.
I like this story about man's best friend. She saved him anymore grief.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Minty knew the truth. The woman was unfaithful. I guess Minty got the man all to herself-bones, socks and playing fetch.
I like this story about man's best friend. She saved him anymore grief.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2013
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Yep! You got it. Thanks for your time and stars.
