Utopia
The future is bright for mankind.2 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
The world has always wanted humanity to give it the peace it deserves. I like your poem and it's hope for love(the sun) and truth to flourish.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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The world has always wanted humanity to give it the peace it deserves. I like your poem and it's hope for love(the sun) and truth to flourish.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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As do I
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Keep dreaming-It's a beautiful dream.
If our modern world was ensured a hefty helping of these qualities forever it would be a remarkably better place.
Nicely written 5-7-5 with a great subject choice.
It complies with the syllable count for a 5-7-5.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Keep dreaming-It's a beautiful dream.
If our modern world was ensured a hefty helping of these qualities forever it would be a remarkably better place.
Nicely written 5-7-5 with a great subject choice.
It complies with the syllable count for a 5-7-5.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Beautiful even!!!
