A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "~Clowns in my Head~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
52 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Bet none of Shakey's clowns looked like this one though, Dean. LOL..You are something else, my friend. The poetry is great. Really great...and the artwork...or whatever you are deeming it is ghastly tosay the least.
you have a lot of fan attention on here, my friend and well deserved. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Bet none of Shakey's clowns looked like this one though, Dean. LOL..You are something else, my friend. The poetry is great. Really great...and the artwork...or whatever you are deeming it is ghastly tosay the least.
you have a lot of fan attention on here, my friend and well deserved. Bob
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Bob. But, hey, you ain't doing too bad here either. Have you seen the welcome pages lately, LOL? Your story, 'Fatal Beauty' is always there!
Thanks very much for the wonderful review!
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Welcome pages???? LOL What's that? sorry, I don't think I know? Bob
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The FanStory home page, where they list "Todays Best Received stories", Best Received Poems", etc That page. I always see Mastery there, LOL...
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Nah, you just think you do...only after I post a new chapter which is about once per week...then it lasts for about four days...Thanks though...sharp eye. Bob
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Perhaps you're right, and it only seems that way. But, that's just a testament to your great talent.
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:) Aw shucks, Dean. LOL...bob
Comment from mumanoon
I really enjoyed your latest post. Clowns have always been scary to me, so I can definitely relate to what you have written!.. Tell me where do you get your inspiration from? Also where do you get the amazing artwork to go with your writing, because it always makes your writing look so polished...Another Triumph...great Job!E
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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I really enjoyed your latest post. Clowns have always been scary to me, so I can definitely relate to what you have written!.. Tell me where do you get your inspiration from? Also where do you get the amazing artwork to go with your writing, because it always makes your writing look so polished...Another Triumph...great Job!E
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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I do the artwork myself. They're "One-Of-a-Kind" Kuch originals, LOL! I am very glad that you feel this way, it makes all that work & effort well worth it.
Thanks, again...
Comment from Sueellen11
My friend you did it again, outstanding write, those scary clowns , you know there are many children scared of clowns I never realised just how many, my friend this is intense , I feel it is a metaphor for the demons of a schizophrenic and the torments placed on the mind, disguising themselves as clowns, sorry if I interpreted your poem incorrectly, great write one to think about, blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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My friend you did it again, outstanding write, those scary clowns , you know there are many children scared of clowns I never realised just how many, my friend this is intense , I feel it is a metaphor for the demons of a schizophrenic and the torments placed on the mind, disguising themselves as clowns, sorry if I interpreted your poem incorrectly, great write one to think about, blessings sueellen
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Your assessments would be right, Sueellen11. Thanks for your fantastic review, my friend!
Comment from alexgeorge
Though they are supposed to cause laughter and to entertain, it's a fact that some children are frightened by them and this has been built upon in the movie business. Another perfect pictapoem from the master of horror ~Dean Kuch~
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Though they are supposed to cause laughter and to entertain, it's a fact that some children are frightened by them and this has been built upon in the movie business. Another perfect pictapoem from the master of horror ~Dean Kuch~
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks a lot, Alex. I really appreciate that, coming from you, my friend!
Comment from gaangel62
Thanks Dean for the explanation of clowns....which I really don't like....clowns just freak me out....and you have made it worse with your poem...LOL.....Thanks for sharing....Hugs....Angie...very well written....
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Thanks Dean for the explanation of clowns....which I really don't like....clowns just freak me out....and you have made it worse with your poem...LOL.....Thanks for sharing....Hugs....Angie...very well written....
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2013
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Well, good then Angie, the poem did as it was intended to do...
I truly appreciate the more than kind review!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Another very cleverly composed and exceptionally well presented poem.
I do enjoy these less violent poems and I don't feel any real impact is lost in this format. Your skill and mastery more than compensates for less violence. This is not a judgement on your choice just a statement of mine.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Another very cleverly composed and exceptionally well presented poem.
I do enjoy these less violent poems and I don't feel any real impact is lost in this format. Your skill and mastery more than compensates for less violence. This is not a judgement on your choice just a statement of mine.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, seken58, and you're right. Sometimes, it's the things a writer doesn't allow us to see that terrify us the most. In the open shark attack sequence of Jaws, we didn't get to see the shark. We knew from the girl's screaming that he was there. We knew he was biting and eating her, ripping her to shreds, but we never saw anything but her head and shoulders above the surface of the water. And, we were horrified...
Thanks for your wonderful review and spot-on assessment.
Comment from barkingdog
SO many children are terrified of clowns, so this was a very good addition for your book--a child who's taken over by the clowns in his head. His imagination actually manifests itself and takes him over. I don't think Mommy is going to be around in the morning.
Great rhyming quatrains, even tempo and use of strong descriptors.(gushing wounds, gnashing teeth)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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SO many children are terrified of clowns, so this was a very good addition for your book--a child who's taken over by the clowns in his head. His imagination actually manifests itself and takes him over. I don't think Mommy is going to be around in the morning.
Great rhyming quatrains, even tempo and use of strong descriptors.(gushing wounds, gnashing teeth)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, BD. I really needed your expert assessment and analysis of this one...
I sure do appreciate it, too!
Comment from Tomes Johnston
The author is back to writing what he writes best in this piece of writing. This is a beautifully dark and sinister poem. These clowns are demonic and evil, and I love them.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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The author is back to writing what he writes best in this piece of writing. This is a beautifully dark and sinister poem. These clowns are demonic and evil, and I love them.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Tomes. I love clowns, too. But, do they love me?
Seriously, I do appreciate the compliment and the fantastic review.
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I loved reading this.
Comment from Liz Dunbee
Another fantastic poem from you. Clowns are not always entertaining and amusing for children and I have seen many kids terrified of clowns. This certainly is a nightmare for the child in the poem. You information on clowns is very well researched and informative. Well done on a very unusual and entertaining piece.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Another fantastic poem from you. Clowns are not always entertaining and amusing for children and I have seen many kids terrified of clowns. This certainly is a nightmare for the child in the poem. You information on clowns is very well researched and informative. Well done on a very unusual and entertaining piece.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thank you, Liz. I really appreciate that.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Clowns in the closet and
under the bed?
Word on the street says
your better off dead.
Brings back some haunting memories from childhood nightmares. Brrr. Loved the last line for sweet mama. Erie write my friend, Bill
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Clowns in the closet and
under the bed?
Word on the street says
your better off dead.
Brings back some haunting memories from childhood nightmares. Brrr. Loved the last line for sweet mama. Erie write my friend, Bill
Comment Written 03-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much, Bill. Poor kid, I guess he found his calling, huh?
