Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is lovely. You have done a marvelous job with this. I especially like play on words with 'dew'. I enjoyed this on immensely.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks Smurphie!

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks Smurphie!

Comment from gaangel62

Excellent

You say so much in 10 words....this an excellent 5-7-5 poem....I have never had any success with these poems, but yours is excellent....thanks for sharing....Hugs...Angie

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks Angie. I thrive on the use of a few words painting a picture beyond an image.

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks Angie. I thrive on the use of a few words painting a picture beyond an image.

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Jewel,

You have penned a fine haiku and one I enjoyed reading more than once. One must remember haiku allows no caps so you need to fix that. The rose and colors are smashing and you last line is creative. Well done....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Oh wow, I hadn't written one in so long I'd forgottenall the rules! haha

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Oh wow, I hadn't written one in so long I'd forgottenall the rules! haha

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Ah, excellent, Poetic Visionary. "Falling in dew time..." What a lovely play on words. And, your presentation, with the gorgeous pink rose emblazoned against that stark, black ebony background makes for a visual treat for the eyes, as well.

The entire piece is simply outstanding.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thank you Dean!

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thank you Dean!

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

This could apply to many things, fruit, an idea, a relationship....In a few words yu got to the very juicy core of it all....Great job--Ted

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Juicy indeed, Ted. Thank you

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

that picture in itself in the softness of colour sprinkled dew
comes saturated in such gentleness beautiful to the eye excellent piece

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks so much.

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks so much.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, poetic visionary, i enjoyed reading this haiku and that picture seems like the rose petals are just drinking in the water. it's beautiful

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

thank you

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

thank you

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Saturation comes
signs of gentle persuasion
falling in dew time

What a tidy little write this is. The dew time is now and it is beautiful. Sigh.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks sweets!

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks sweets!

reply by Gungalo on 31-Aug-2013

Sigh.

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

Your words and picture are so delicate and full of grace. I loved hot this felt in my heart. So gentle and full of peace. Blessings

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Thanks so much, Matoshka!

reply by Matoshka on 31-Aug-2013

You are so welcome, it was a joy to read. Blessings

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You do take stunning photos :-)
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 format
nice alliteration in saturation/signs
I love the flow of saturation and the idea of the dew persuading the flower to bloom
and what wonderful play on words in dew time/due time - I'm still smiling :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013

Oh good. Haikus are a challenge I love to meet!
So happy you found this smile worthy! Thank you for your kind review!