My Big Green Friend
quatrains in rhyming couplets182 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
just loved your big green friend! love the imagination put into this, and also the adorable picture ...the child is precious! thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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just loved your big green friend! love the imagination put into this, and also the adorable picture ...the child is precious! thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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justjo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome!
Comment from Spitfire
Okay, did Sawyer just get a stuffed dragon? That's what I thought until I read about the gum! Looking at the photo, Sawyer looks as if he had bubble gum. Maybe he's looking in the mirror?
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Okay, did Sawyer just get a stuffed dragon? That's what I thought until I read about the gum! Looking at the photo, Sawyer looks as if he had bubble gum. Maybe he's looking in the mirror?
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Spitfire, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from barkingdog
You just have to get this one illustrated. A verse on each page would make an awesome children's book.
From being afraid of the green dragon to becoming his friend.
Your rhyme and meter are perfect.
Please put this out there for other children to enjoy!(Littler kids than me. LOL)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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You just have to get this one illustrated. A verse on each page would make an awesome children's book.
From being afraid of the green dragon to becoming his friend.
Your rhyme and meter are perfect.
Please put this out there for other children to enjoy!(Littler kids than me. LOL)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much for your encouragement, Ellen :-) Brooke
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I meant it!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Dear Brooke,
The smile that quivers on my lips has turned into a broad grin when I reach the end of many of your fabulous poems!
This was one of them.
I love the very first line ... sets the stage perfectly.
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Dear Brooke,
The smile that quivers on my lips has turned into a broad grin when I reach the end of many of your fabulous poems!
This was one of them.
I love the very first line ... sets the stage perfectly.
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Sonali, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jade Lawson
Firstly, this is a great picture.
This was a very interesting, entertaining and creative poem. I enjoyed the metaphor in it and the message that shows that we should not be afraid of the unknown, because it may not be scared at all. I think this poem is a wonderful way to show this to children.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Firstly, this is a great picture.
This was a very interesting, entertaining and creative poem. I enjoyed the metaphor in it and the message that shows that we should not be afraid of the unknown, because it may not be scared at all. I think this poem is a wonderful way to show this to children.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Angel :-) Brooke
Comment from Parissa
I love the picture and this poem is very light. Your writting put a smile to my face and brought me back to childhood memories. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I love the picture and this poem is very light. Your writting put a smile to my face and brought me back to childhood memories. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Parissa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
Very fun bubble gum bubble blowing and popping poem. Perfect rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful and cute photo of your little Sawyer.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Very fun bubble gum bubble blowing and popping poem. Perfect rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful and cute photo of your little Sawyer.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Teresa, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
This is an excellent poem teaching why there is no need to fear someone or something just because it is large in size. A healthy respect for the unknown is far better than a morbid fear of anything and everything we encounter for the very first time. We, I believe are born with a radar that can distinguish the difference between a snarling fang toothed monster and a smiling somewhat goofy looking, overgrown being that is frightened by its own shadow.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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This is an excellent poem teaching why there is no need to fear someone or something just because it is large in size. A healthy respect for the unknown is far better than a morbid fear of anything and everything we encounter for the very first time. We, I believe are born with a radar that can distinguish the difference between a snarling fang toothed monster and a smiling somewhat goofy looking, overgrown being that is frightened by its own shadow.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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nomi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from His Grayness
Brooke: Really, really, cute piece of work here! Great photo as always (Sawyer is remarkably cute) but then you wouldn't know that would you?? Hhrmph: so back to the poem..well It the sixer that says it all! Terrific: Vance
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Brooke: Really, really, cute piece of work here! Great photo as always (Sawyer is remarkably cute) but then you wouldn't know that would you?? Hhrmph: so back to the poem..well It the sixer that says it all! Terrific: Vance
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Vance, thank you so very much for your gracious comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
This shows that we like familiarity. Anything different is a threat, and that starts I think the minute we're born. Wish I could meet a creature with purple feet and green scales. Very nicely written. Les
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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This shows that we like familiarity. Anything different is a threat, and that starts I think the minute we're born. Wish I could meet a creature with purple feet and green scales. Very nicely written. Les
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Les :-) Brooke
