My Big Green Friend
quatrains in rhyming couplets182 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
My big green friend, that's a great picture,father and son having fun, that's a very nice story poem,very nice rhyming.
I enjoyd reading it.God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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My big green friend, that's a great picture,father and son having fun, that's a very nice story poem,very nice rhyming.
I enjoyd reading it.God bless you, Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from marycec
Fun filled quatrains with rhyming couplets. You draw a great picture of the gum bubble blowing monster. I picture a friendly looking Incredible Hulk. Sawyer's expression is brilliant.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Fun filled quatrains with rhyming couplets. You draw a great picture of the gum bubble blowing monster. I picture a friendly looking Incredible Hulk. Sawyer's expression is brilliant.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Teresa Paul
You are right that is a wonderful picture of your grandson. A smoothly flowing rhyming poem that carries the reader to the end so gently. Your talent is amazing. I love your stories that stimulate the imagination of the reader. Lovely stories that anyone could entertain their children or grandchildren. Well penned. Teresa.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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You are right that is a wonderful picture of your grandson. A smoothly flowing rhyming poem that carries the reader to the end so gently. Your talent is amazing. I love your stories that stimulate the imagination of the reader. Lovely stories that anyone could entertain their children or grandchildren. Well penned. Teresa.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome. The pleasure is always mine, I can assure you. Teresa.
Comment from Pullmanspb
The accompanying photo did nothing but make it even better. It's a lovely, and loving, portrayal of the child. I liked how he scared himself with something we adults take for granted.
Fun to read.
Steven
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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The accompanying photo did nothing but make it even better. It's a lovely, and loving, portrayal of the child. I liked how he scared himself with something we adults take for granted.
Fun to read.
Steven
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Steven, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from pbroussard209
lol, I love this and I think I will read it to my five year old tonight at bed time, he will love it too. He loves silly monster stories.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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lol, I love this and I think I will read it to my five year old tonight at bed time, he will love it too. He loves silly monster stories.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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pbroussard, thank you :-) I'm honored you would share this with your son :-) Brooke
Comment from MM lives on :)
adewpearl it shows just how much you adore your grandson by how much you write of him. And how sweet the poems are just as this one. I enjoyed the playful read thank you for sharing..
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adewpearl it shows just how much you adore your grandson by how much you write of him. And how sweet the poems are just as this one. I enjoyed the playful read thank you for sharing..
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I agree, That is some expression. I don't know what to say about this poem. I enjoyed your description of a would be monster that became a very good friend. A good example that things are not always as they seem. A very good poem Brooke. Nancy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I agree, That is some expression. I don't know what to say about this poem. I enjoyed your description of a would be monster that became a very good friend. A good example that things are not always as they seem. A very good poem Brooke. Nancy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Nancy :-)
Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Brooke
Wat a great expression I see on Sawyer's face.
I get the feeling with your wonderful rhyming poem you are referring to the Jolly Green Giant..
Thank you for putting a smile on my face..
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Hello Brooke
Wat a great expression I see on Sawyer's face.
I get the feeling with your wonderful rhyming poem you are referring to the Jolly Green Giant..
Thank you for putting a smile on my face..
Gert
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Gert, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Opal H.
This poem is so adorable! Although he looks like he's looking down rather than up... but what an expression! Shocked indeed!! :D
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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This poem is so adorable! Although he looks like he's looking down rather than up... but what an expression! Shocked indeed!! :D
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Opal :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
It's just a bubble, nothing more --
just blow another three or four."
And that is how we came to be,
the best of friends you'll ever see.
another one of your lovely - light-hearted poems, which are such a treat - and such a happy picture of Sawyer and his doting father.
Margaret
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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It's just a bubble, nothing more --
just blow another three or four."
And that is how we came to be,
the best of friends you'll ever see.
another one of your lovely - light-hearted poems, which are such a treat - and such a happy picture of Sawyer and his doting father.
Margaret
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Margaret :-) Brooke
