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My Big Green Friend

quatrains in rhyming couplets

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Comment from Craigitar
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Another great poem/story for little ones. Great solid rhythm and rhyme and an imaginative tale sure to delight. Good job as always and a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

Comment from nancyjam
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This is so cute, Brooke. sure to please any
child.
Very imaginative and fun with great rhyme
and meter and wonderful images to
charm a child.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

Comment from babylonia
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brooke,
LOL sounds like grandma brooke is spouting some more love for her sawyer. nicely done. it looks like you have a whole parcel of them to choose from. keep up the good work.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

Comment from Hitcher
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Some expressions are so so Precious indeed Brooke, one can often relate a moment of magic to a child's innocent and often hilarious expression. A memory to treasure for sure. Loved your little poem friend.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

Comment from ruzu27
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Another Jewel for Sawyer's collection! It will be a great pleasure for your grandson to read all the poems one day.

I like your great imagery, the good rhymes, the interesting and funny story. Sawyer's picture is outstanding. Thank you for sharing, Brooke
:) Ruth

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    Ruth, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from samandlancelot
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Brooke,

Your poem is so very delightful and a lift to my evening. I love your story of how the creature and the boy became friends. Great pictures, too!

Patricia

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    Thank you so very much, Patricia, for this generous response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from chromeangel33
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Great poem! You definitely have a knack for creativity! I believe that you may have forgot a few quotation marks after pout and before It's. Happy writing!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    Thanks, chromeangel, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from w.j.debi
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Humorous look at accepting others as they are instead of being frightened just.because they are different. As always, you have perfect meter and rhyme. I have no sixes left to give, but this deserves it.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    w.j.debi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Black_Oxygen
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~ Little Prince Sawyer ~

Well Done ~ Brooke

This poetry flows beautifully from beginning to end. The
rhymes are selected and used nicely. The ending is powerful
and ignites warm feelings. Thank You for your creation.

The attached photo of the Prince perched on the King's
shoulder is very endearing.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    Ron, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I love the surprised look on Sawyers face. It's priceless. I will be sharing this poem with my new first graders. I can't wait to see their pictures.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2013
    I can't wait to hear their reaction :-) Thanks so much, Barbara :=-) Brooke