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Ethereal

The incorporeal,spiritual influence of god

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Comment from Liz Dunbee
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I love these words. They have an amazing effect. This is a very powerful verse. It is almost like a prayer. I wish I had a six to give you. Good Luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
    Well,thanks, you're way too generous.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
    Well,thanks, you're way too generous.
Comment from SteveY
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Great job in writing this one. But the word "transudes" is a new one on me. Maybe "cascades" through my soul would still work. My spell check doesn't recognize "transudes" either.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
    Transudes:to pass through the pores or interstices of a membrane.
    I am sorry for being unclear,what it means is the word passing
    through my soul;or the membrane of my soul..
Comment from Steve Pantazis
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Thanks for introducing me to the word "transude". I've never seen it used in a poetic piece, but it belongs in your senryu quite nicely.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
    Oh!Thanks,i have never posted anything before,so when i noticed i
    had received a review;i was bracing myself there for a vilification.