Tooth Fairy-(Rhyming)
What happens when a child looses a tooth7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a cheery little poem that remembers and favors the time of the tooth fairy dreams and the wondrous imagination of a child.
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This is a cheery little poem that remembers and favors the time of the tooth fairy dreams and the wondrous imagination of a child.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
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Comment from wierdgrace
Bright and early, leaping out of bed,
raising the pillow above my head,
my eyes light up, because I see,
5 cent piece all for me.
remember when it was only 5 cent, haha, this one is great, good entry, says so much, and is fun fun fun. good luck in the contest,
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Bright and early, leaping out of bed,
raising the pillow above my head,
my eyes light up, because I see,
5 cent piece all for me.
remember when it was only 5 cent, haha, this one is great, good entry, says so much, and is fun fun fun. good luck in the contest,
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Comment from emjaihammond
It is one of the fun things about loosing your teeth when you are a little child. Most of us have memories of waiting for the tooth fairy to come, and those of us with children know the other side of the coin Well done.
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It is one of the fun things about loosing your teeth when you are a little child. Most of us have memories of waiting for the tooth fairy to come, and those of us with children know the other side of the coin Well done.
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Comment from zanya
A lovely reflection on this childhood moment when the tooth fairy pays a visit, generating excitement and wonder'very excited to the core'. A moment to savor and remember.
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A lovely reflection on this childhood moment when the tooth fairy pays a visit, generating excitement and wonder'very excited to the core'. A moment to savor and remember.
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Comment from lorijean
Such a lovely tradition, it happened to me when I was a child, it is so sweet, a pleasure to read, and thank you for sharing......
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Such a lovely tradition, it happened to me when I was a child, it is so sweet, a pleasure to read, and thank you for sharing......
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Comment from gudbjorg
I really like this poetry, it has a good message about the tooth going to the fairy heaven, something lasting for children to think afterwards. it is very well written poem, has a good flow with a good rhyme and rhythm. Well done.
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I really like this poetry, it has a good message about the tooth going to the fairy heaven, something lasting for children to think afterwards. it is very well written poem, has a good flow with a good rhyme and rhythm. Well done.
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Comment from PhilipCatshill
Ah! Every Mum and Dad has been there with their six/seven year old offspring, waiting for the magic, and I guess every child has tried to catch the fairy on that nightly visit. Nice rhyming scheme although I'm not too fond of the place where the phrase is split between lines to force the rhyme "eyes" and "sigh", as that tends to interrupt the flow.
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Ah! Every Mum and Dad has been there with their six/seven year old offspring, waiting for the magic, and I guess every child has tried to catch the fairy on that nightly visit. Nice rhyming scheme although I'm not too fond of the place where the phrase is split between lines to force the rhyme "eyes" and "sigh", as that tends to interrupt the flow.
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