Comment from sweetwoodjax

Good

this is beautiful, dreamduster, but it's written in the wrong format, it is supposed to be syllables, it's an easy fix though... example

Come close to my soul,
Red lips whisper promises
Sleep next to my heart

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013

I thought is was to have five word, followed by seven, ending with five. 5-7-5? But thanks.

Comment from Rmocruz

Good

This is a worthy romance writing, but the format is not correct to the five-seven-five writing prompt.
You may wish to edit for syllable count.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013

Example? Thanks

reply by Rmocruz on 26-Aug-2013

The writing prompt is an example, click on it.
You're welcome.

Comment from ReaThomas

Excellent

I've been coming across a lot of romance poetry today. This is lovely... three lines, yet such vivid imagery. Very well written - good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013

Thanks