A conflict of self worthiness
Am I worth it, or have I lost it?2 total reviews
Comment from Niccort72
These are very deep questions. If you change, what am I? You are becoming who you really are. Great job. It takes bravery to be who you really are, who your meant to be.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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These are very deep questions. If you change, what am I? You are becoming who you really are. Great job. It takes bravery to be who you really are, who your meant to be.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the feedback!
Comment from Gabrieltheswifter
I loved the poem, The one thing I would have changed is the sentence I cry, truth is lies, not lie. It would increase the Rhyme flow.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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I loved the poem, The one thing I would have changed is the sentence I cry, truth is lies, not lie. It would increase the Rhyme flow.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the input. I guess what the verse I wrote was trying to communicate was that truth and lie are interchangeable and become ultimately the same in society. If I changed it to "lies," I would have to change the whole verse to I cry, truths are lies.
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ooooooooooooh I thought that you were saying that it is because truths are only lies, is the reason that you cry.
