thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Door of life"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
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Comment from JennaG
This is a great poem for this writing prompt! I especially liked the lines "Though he stood there Knocking day and night. Knocking and knocking until I finally gave in". I like the idea of opening the heart's door to God. I noticed a couple really small typos: "Gods" should be "God's" and "hearts" should be "heart's". Just thought I'd point those out in case you hadn't caught them already. Your poem is really well done and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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This is a great poem for this writing prompt! I especially liked the lines "Though he stood there Knocking day and night. Knocking and knocking until I finally gave in". I like the idea of opening the heart's door to God. I noticed a couple really small typos: "Gods" should be "God's" and "hearts" should be "heart's". Just thought I'd point those out in case you hadn't caught them already. Your poem is really well done and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words.I also want to thank you for the corrections in my poem i am thankful Blessings
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Thank you for your review and kind words.I also want to thank you for the corrections in my poem i am thankful Blessings
