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Comment from krys123
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A beautifully written poem that sure should win the contest. It is very inspiring and very angelic so more so that it's mostly Godly and saintly. You sent in your heart and that is the greatest gift under the sun. It's like you being pierced the Holy Fathers Son's love. You know the feeling now it's one that's really hard to explain. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with all of us. You have a good one and may the sun always shine on your shoulders.
AK

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words hope you have a great day
reply by krys123 on 22-Aug-2013
    You're very welcome you written a very good poem.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Poet,

This is the best "Behind the Door" poem yet. My favorite poetry to read or write is inspirational or spiritual which your poem fits perfectly. I love the way it's written and the message it gives. Bravo!!!!!

MizKat

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words and my first 6 stars I am glad you liked my poem God bless you
reply by MizKat on 22-Aug-2013
    I loved your poem and am very happy to meet another sister or brother in the Lord.
Comment from bard owl
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What a wonderful poem of redemption. There is a famous portrait of Jesus knocking at the door. Your poem reminded me of this. Excellent imagery. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words, I have a picture of Jesus knocking on a door hanging on my wall .Hope you have a bless day
Comment from Satine Dreaming
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Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts and victory after darkness. I too was once where you were and can now enjoy the beauty of life through His love.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words.To God be the glory.
Comment from Niccort72
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Beautiful. Brilliant. Deep. Thank you for allowing me to read this expression from your heart. Short and sweet, easy to read, flowed really well and it had musicality to it. I read the words out-loud and they rolled off my tongue, great job.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your wonderful review and kind words blessings
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your wonderful review and kind words blessings
Comment from SteveY
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Love it! Completely true in every way! Excellent job of reminding all of us to freaking open up the door to our hearts so the magic can happen!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review. what a world this could be if all would open that door.Blessings
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review. what a world this could be if all would open that door.Blessings
Comment from denhagan
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This was a nice inspirational poem, that read easily and smoothly, with good rhyming. Nice appropriate picture to accompany the poem.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    thank you for your review and kind words blessings
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    thank you for your review and kind words blessings
reply by denhagan on 22-Aug-2013
    You're welcome
Comment from Ben Colder
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Excellent praise to the Lord. A poem of thanksgiving for salvation. Best wishes to you in the contest. The poem flowed well with a good rhythm.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words,God is good. blessings
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words,God is good. blessings
Comment from donkeyoatey
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It is true, we often hide behind the closed doors of our minds, and do not allow the light to come in. Fear of change is mankind's worst enemy. I truly enjoyed your poemon and it's uplifting theme. Very thought provoking. Thanks for choosing my artwork I am honored. DonkeyOatey

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words and thank you for the use of your beautiful art work. Blessings
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words and thank you for the use of your beautiful art work. Blessings
Comment from Belinda
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Hi, Poet, this is so beautiful, deep and soothing. You use the word 'door' very effectively to convey your meaning. Good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words blessings
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your review and kind words blessings