thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Door of life"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
21 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
I love the gentle, sweet simplicity of your lines, smk.
John 3:16 - where would one be if he hand't knocked? :)
All the best in the contest.
Thank you from me too, Jesus! :)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I love the gentle, sweet simplicity of your lines, smk.
John 3:16 - where would one be if he hand't knocked? :)
All the best in the contest.
Thank you from me too, Jesus! :)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words.I would not want to think about life with out him. Have a blessed day
Comment from angelface2
Very good s.m. I like the message from this piece of work. I have a picture of Jesus knocking on a door. Kept as a reminder that he is always there. Nicely done. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Very good s.m. I like the message from this piece of work. I have a picture of Jesus knocking on a door. Kept as a reminder that he is always there. Nicely done. Miss Sally
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Miss Sally thank YOU for your review and kind words .I also have a picture of Christ knocking on my wall.It is one of my favorites.
Comment from judelesemann
What a beautiful poem. It flows so well and you have delivered a wonderful message. If only the world would listen to it! Keep on writing! Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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What a beautiful poem. It flows so well and you have delivered a wonderful message. If only the world would listen to it! Keep on writing! Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Jude thank you for your review and kind words.Yes it would be nice if we could get the world to listen,we just keep praying,blessings back at ya. sandy
Comment from simonbagh
Found the light
My life is not dark
like it was before.
Thank you Jesus for
Knocking on my heart's
door.
I love the theme and love that flow in the whole piece, nice,
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Found the light
My life is not dark
like it was before.
Thank you Jesus for
Knocking on my heart's
door.
I love the theme and love that flow in the whole piece, nice,
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words blessings.S.M.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very wel lwritten, sm kirby, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the way we have to open the door to our hearts when Jesus wants to come in. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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this is very wel lwritten, sm kirby, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the way we have to open the door to our hearts when Jesus wants to come in. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words.sandy
Comment from amanda98653
It's God gift of opening another door of hope and happiness for me. We happened before is just another part of our past. A great, lovely poem.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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It's God gift of opening another door of hope and happiness for me. We happened before is just another part of our past. A great, lovely poem.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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Thank you for you review God bless
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Thank you for you review God bless
Comment from Leineco
Very nicely done :-)
The message is spoken without shouting, and the poem is
engaging. I enjoyed it enough to vote for it :-)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Very nicely done :-)
The message is spoken without shouting, and the poem is
engaging. I enjoyed it enough to vote for it :-)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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thank you so much for your review and kind words. To God be the glory, Hope you have a blessed day .
Comment from gramalot8
I loved this. It is so important to have the Lord on our side of the door. I really appreciated this message. Thanks for sharing with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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I loved this. It is so important to have the Lord on our side of the door. I really appreciated this message. Thanks for sharing with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words.Hope you have a great day
Comment from Glasstruth
Was a little confused about the knocking until I got to the end. I know people can be very stubborn when it comes to opening the doors to experience life, as it should be. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Was a little confused about the knocking until I got to the end. I know people can be very stubborn when it comes to opening the doors to experience life, as it should be. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review and kind words have a bless day
Comment from TAB_that's me
Jesus is always behind the door, the window or our darkness, we just have to open it and let His light in. Very, very good write and an excellent entry in the contest.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Jesus is always behind the door, the window or our darkness, we just have to open it and let His light in. Very, very good write and an excellent entry in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words.HAVE A BLESS DAY
