Amazing Space
A poem incorporating two colors18 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this ...juxtaposition of creativity and analytical thought........
Juggling pinks in satin dancing shoes
Throwing them into the air.............
God bless ..I love the joie de vivre.....of this
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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I love this ...juxtaposition of creativity and analytical thought........
Juggling pinks in satin dancing shoes
Throwing them into the air.............
God bless ..I love the joie de vivre.....of this
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thank you kiwijenny. I very much appreciate your kind review and comments. Take care.
Comment from Earthwriter
very well done in the parameters and rules laid out without them i was left trying to figure out the meaning excellent job on this one
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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very well done in the parameters and rules laid out without them i was left trying to figure out the meaning excellent job on this one
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your comments and your review. Actually, to give you a little background, I was working in an art store frame shop when I became inspired to write this poem.
Comment from solsymfune
I loved this poem. It was an unexpected image and really contributed to the strength and creativity. I loved the animation of it all and appreciate that something beautiful can be seen anywhere. The action words makes it playful but in a sophisticated way. Really great job!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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I loved this poem. It was an unexpected image and really contributed to the strength and creativity. I loved the animation of it all and appreciate that something beautiful can be seen anywhere. The action words makes it playful but in a sophisticated way. Really great job!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for your generous review and comments. I am glad that you enjoyed this poem!
Comment from adewpearl
I like the alliteration in juxtaposing geometries juggling
I love the positive, sensual quality in the steel blue eyes and the pinkness of a happy person's face and of pink balloons - definitely a good focus on color that creates mood :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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I like the alliteration in juxtaposing geometries juggling
I love the positive, sensual quality in the steel blue eyes and the pinkness of a happy person's face and of pink balloons - definitely a good focus on color that creates mood :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and comments, Brooke. I appreciate your feedback. It is really nice to see how the writing strikes you.
Comment from linsbm
Very interesting poem. I pondered on and became confused at first. The important thing was you've met the requirement of the contest -- to be able to incorporate at least two colors in the poem. Pink and blue matched and you are intelligent enough to render your message acrossed. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Very interesting poem. I pondered on and became confused at first. The important thing was you've met the requirement of the contest -- to be able to incorporate at least two colors in the poem. Pink and blue matched and you are intelligent enough to render your message acrossed. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
Comment Written 25-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013
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Yes, I suppose that my poems are unusual, which is probably why I do not get many votes. I do not think I write for the main stream. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
Comment from Bill Schott
The two colors, also representing the male and female juxtapositions, seem to being following the line separating hard, cold reasoning (blue) and sweet, relaxed imagination (pink).
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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The two colors, also representing the male and female juxtapositions, seem to being following the line separating hard, cold reasoning (blue) and sweet, relaxed imagination (pink).
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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That is an interesting perspective of my poem. Thank you for sharing it with me. I think there is a little female and male in all of us.
Comment from michaelcahill
this was a very pleasant read for me. lots of nice and very original imagery. very much enjoy thoughts that come from the authors mind and nowhere else as yours clearly do. very well done and also true to the task at hand.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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this was a very pleasant read for me. lots of nice and very original imagery. very much enjoy thoughts that come from the authors mind and nowhere else as yours clearly do. very well done and also true to the task at hand.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your comments Michael.
Comment from SteveY
Another very imaginative poem captured by this creative writer. Would have liked to see a picture of this scene that you so painted with your words.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Another very imaginative poem captured by this creative writer. Would have liked to see a picture of this scene that you so painted with your words.
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Steve.
