The Woman Of Discontent
A weird poem I wrote inspired by Yasue's Surreal artwork.82 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A story in this poem appears somewhat kind of a weird and surreal as it clearly tells the very aspect of melancholic and sombre pattern of the painted woman's head, it speaks even more, so well slated. 07/820
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A story in this poem appears somewhat kind of a weird and surreal as it clearly tells the very aspect of melancholic and sombre pattern of the painted woman's head, it speaks even more, so well slated. 07/820
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Dear.
Comment from nancyjam
Great interpretation of the picture, Justin.
Your imagery fits perfectly with the mysterious
lady and her surroundings.
good luck in the contest. Nancy
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Great interpretation of the picture, Justin.
Your imagery fits perfectly with the mysterious
lady and her surroundings.
good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you nancy.
Comment from Ridley Williams
Interesting take on the picture. The world as seen from the ocean, "where stars are inverted in the aquatic sky". It has a nice feel to the piece. Good luck in the contest. Ridley (If you ever get a chance, pull up my piece, "That Funny Feeling". I took my contest piece in an unusual direction, R)
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Interesting take on the picture. The world as seen from the ocean, "where stars are inverted in the aquatic sky". It has a nice feel to the piece. Good luck in the contest. Ridley (If you ever get a chance, pull up my piece, "That Funny Feeling". I took my contest piece in an unusual direction, R)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Ridley.
Comment from Brocha1
I enjoyed this very much."stars inverted in the aquatic sky.' the ideas and metaphors combine to create a very surreal poem where anything can happen.
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I enjoyed this very much."stars inverted in the aquatic sky.' the ideas and metaphors combine to create a very surreal poem where anything can happen.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Brocha.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Response to notes: I'm a child of the sixties (teenager in the sixties). I never used any dope but heard about people ending up on bad acid trips. That's the first thing I thought of when I saw this picture! I like your interpretation--that the poem implies a world in which there's no gravity or logic.
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Response to notes: I'm a child of the sixties (teenager in the sixties). I never used any dope but heard about people ending up on bad acid trips. That's the first thing I thought of when I saw this picture! I like your interpretation--that the poem implies a world in which there's no gravity or logic.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Janice.
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed your poem, it is your own perspective of the sad, odd painting of an old woman's head, using an angle that have not been presented yet by other authors I have reviewed. Well done, God bless.
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I enjoyed your poem, it is your own perspective of the sad, odd painting of an old woman's head, using an angle that have not been presented yet by other authors I have reviewed. Well done, God bless.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Nassus.
Comment from denhagan
This was an interesting poem, written in rhyming couplets, about the lady in the picture. Clever and colorful use of words. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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This was an interesting poem, written in rhyming couplets, about the lady in the picture. Clever and colorful use of words. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Hagan.
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You're welcome
Comment from ravenblack
Like your surrealistic interpretation of this surrealistic painting, really a straight forward look as it is a disembodied head submerged in what can be scene as a world in which sky is sea. One minor nit pick- "fishes" should be " fish".
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Like your surrealistic interpretation of this surrealistic painting, really a straight forward look as it is a disembodied head submerged in what can be scene as a world in which sky is sea. One minor nit pick- "fishes" should be " fish".
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you raven.
Comment from eafournier
It's interesting that you perceive the woman's head as being disembodied in a world where sea and sky are intermingled. Creative interpretation!
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It's interesting that you perceive the woman's head as being disembodied in a world where sea and sky are intermingled. Creative interpretation!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Fournier.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Yes this is a different twist on the photo thats for sure Seems I had the same realizations when listing to SGT PEPPERS LONELY HEARTS CLUB BAND back in the year of 68 Of course I had a little help from my friends too heheh
TK
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Yes this is a different twist on the photo thats for sure Seems I had the same realizations when listing to SGT PEPPERS LONELY HEARTS CLUB BAND back in the year of 68 Of course I had a little help from my friends too heheh
TK
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you knight.
