Steve's Story-Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Palais de Poop"A collection of my poems
36 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
:-) Definitely a humorous approach....to a not so humorous job :-)
And done with great rhythm, rhyme and panache!!
I enjoyed every minute of reading this rant!!!
Nice job :-)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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:-) Definitely a humorous approach....to a not so humorous job :-)
And done with great rhythm, rhyme and panache!!
I enjoyed every minute of reading this rant!!!
Nice job :-)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from bard owl
This poem deserves a six star rating. I am so sorry I have already given out my quota for the week. The rhythm and rhyme are perfect and along with the humour, there is a touch of truth - manure nurtures some fabulous crops. Best of luck in the contest. I don't see how this can miss being a winner. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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This poem deserves a six star rating. I am so sorry I have already given out my quota for the week. The rhythm and rhyme are perfect and along with the humour, there is a touch of truth - manure nurtures some fabulous crops. Best of luck in the contest. I don't see how this can miss being a winner. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the generous review and the virtual six.
Comment from Zue65
Excellent poem that captured your emotion, showing your dislike of chicken poo but made fun of this dislike through the lines and words in this not funny, but funny poem. Good luck in the contest, and God bless.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Excellent poem that captured your emotion, showing your dislike of chicken poo but made fun of this dislike through the lines and words in this not funny, but funny poem. Good luck in the contest, and God bless.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from w.j.debi
You did a great job with the prompt. This is certainly an unsavory task which produces good results, and you made it amusing to read about. Good aabb rhyming scheme and a good cadence. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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You did a great job with the prompt. This is certainly an unsavory task which produces good results, and you made it amusing to read about. Good aabb rhyming scheme and a good cadence. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Cornelius2000
This reads really well with its rollicking rhythm,
The rhyming so clever, for it I would clap.
Surprising that you singled out for a topic,
A virtual truckload of pure chicken crap.
I particularly liked "Dungeon of Dung." Beautiful.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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This reads really well with its rollicking rhythm,
The rhyming so clever, for it I would clap.
Surprising that you singled out for a topic,
A virtual truckload of pure chicken crap.
I particularly liked "Dungeon of Dung." Beautiful.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
This is funny and darling at the same time. I grew up on a farm. Animal shit was way too much a presence in my life in those days. But, to your point, it did make for wonderful crops. Very clever rhyming, well written, well done. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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This is funny and darling at the same time. I grew up on a farm. Animal shit was way too much a presence in my life in those days. But, to your point, it did make for wonderful crops. Very clever rhyming, well written, well done. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Quillian
Wonderful! I love this homage to, what did you call it? Oh yeah, 'Chooky poo manna. MY favorite line is 'the Gulag of guano, The Palis of Poop' That line is worth the price of admission.The last line in that fourth stanza is a leetle long, non? Don't care, you still get a 5. Good luck..Quillian
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Wonderful! I love this homage to, what did you call it? Oh yeah, 'Chooky poo manna. MY favorite line is 'the Gulag of guano, The Palis of Poop' That line is worth the price of admission.The last line in that fourth stanza is a leetle long, non? Don't care, you still get a 5. Good luck..Quillian
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Cedar
This is very well written and very funny. I got several chuckles from this one. And, since I've been a farmer all my life, I realize that your words are true. Any type of manure will make those vege's stand up tall. Good luck. Bill
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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This is very well written and very funny. I got several chuckles from this one. And, since I've been a farmer all my life, I realize that your words are true. Any type of manure will make those vege's stand up tall. Good luck. Bill
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Carrie Carson
Clever and oh so true, manure does the trick.
No spag caught my eye, good form and flow.
Good luck in the contest, tough match. Thanks for entering and sharing this. :) Carrie
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Clever and oh so true, manure does the trick.
No spag caught my eye, good form and flow.
Good luck in the contest, tough match. Thanks for entering and sharing this. :) Carrie
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thanks, carrie.
Comment from MM lives on :)
This poet rings a wacky but witty bell and riddles my mcfiddle with chicken delight...a silly poem that all would enjoy !
well done and go lay an eggg! ha ha ha!@
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This poet rings a wacky but witty bell and riddles my mcfiddle with chicken delight...a silly poem that all would enjoy !
well done and go lay an eggg! ha ha ha!@
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you!
