Pale Sisters
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Kolk"Science fiction.
14 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
Uh oh, could it be that some particularly bad people be in for a huge surprise. Is it possible that payback is just around the corner for some bad hombres? I sure do hope so. it kind of sticks in my craw to see bad characters continue to get away with all sorts of bad behavior time after time and go scot free.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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Uh oh, could it be that some particularly bad people be in for a huge surprise. Is it possible that payback is just around the corner for some bad hombres? I sure do hope so. it kind of sticks in my craw to see bad characters continue to get away with all sorts of bad behavior time after time and go scot free.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
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More twists ahead.
Comment from emptypage
Oh, my. I like this just recently discovered side of your writing, Bill. You are a man who writes a bit of everything, no?
I thought the second one was dead already. No? Just lost her mind?
Anyway, this story is intriguing. I want to see what it looks like when the "Kolk" arrives.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Oh, my. I like this just recently discovered side of your writing, Bill. You are a man who writes a bit of everything, no?
I thought the second one was dead already. No? Just lost her mind?
Anyway, this story is intriguing. I want to see what it looks like when the "Kolk" arrives.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Thank you, EP, for sticking with the story. Bill
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is an interesting read.
Great choice of artwork.- It's a nice picture of a triage room inside a hospital.
This is a well-written chapter.
Nicely polished.
The font size is perfect, especially for those that have vision problems.
This book is going to be an excellent read.
Thank you for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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This is an interesting read.
Great choice of artwork.- It's a nice picture of a triage room inside a hospital.
This is a well-written chapter.
Nicely polished.
The font size is perfect, especially for those that have vision problems.
This book is going to be an excellent read.
Thank you for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Nicole.
Comment from apky
"We are always together Sophia," stated Linda. "It is only the exterior environment that misdirects our organic being away from the astral plane that we are all capable of experiencing. If it is not reintroduced, it will have to exist just beyond the consciousness until the physical host is exhausted."
I liked this explanation - especially "the consciousness until the physical is exhausted".
Waiting for your next.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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"We are always together Sophia," stated Linda. "It is only the exterior environment that misdirects our organic being away from the astral plane that we are all capable of experiencing. If it is not reintroduced, it will have to exist just beyond the consciousness until the physical host is exhausted."
I liked this explanation - especially "the consciousness until the physical is exhausted".
Waiting for your next.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you, apky, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, I think I'm starting to get this together in my head the tree of them are to come as one in the earthly body of Linda. A fantasy but a believable one. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Hi Bill, I think I'm starting to get this together in my head the tree of them are to come as one in the earthly body of Linda. A fantasy but a believable one. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Ulla. I hope it's coming through okay. Time for another twist.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is becoming the most complicated, thrilling theme, characterization, plot, climax expression; I liked and enjoyed the trend, progression, now the toughest use of Kolk, and transformation of body; 6-Star for imaginative expression
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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This is becoming the most complicated, thrilling theme, characterization, plot, climax expression; I liked and enjoyed the trend, progression, now the toughest use of Kolk, and transformation of body; 6-Star for imaginative expression
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you, ALD, for the exceptional review. Bill
Comment from mbroyles2
Wow this is starting to make sense.
I really enjoy the way you set this chapter up.
Sophie, Jay, and Linda will all be in one body?
That makes for interesting reading.
Great job!
Michael
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Wow this is starting to make sense.
I really enjoy the way you set this chapter up.
Sophie, Jay, and Linda will all be in one body?
That makes for interesting reading.
Great job!
Michael
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Michael, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Mustang Patty
I like the introduction of the other 'plane.' It is a bit of fantastic fantasy that intrigues the reader. I look forward to reading more and see what happens when the collective takes over Linda's body.
~patty~
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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I like the introduction of the other 'plane.' It is a bit of fantastic fantasy that intrigues the reader. I look forward to reading more and see what happens when the collective takes over Linda's body.
~patty~
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Patty, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from chcbeck
Reading the introduction I wasn't expecting the spiritual element which gripped my interest further. The content and dialogue both read extremely well. It definitely gripped me and I certainly wanted to read more.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Reading the introduction I wasn't expecting the spiritual element which gripped my interest further. The content and dialogue both read extremely well. It definitely gripped me and I certainly wanted to read more.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from joneau2
A very intriguing story. It maintained my interest from beginning to end. Very well written, the story flowed smoothly. I need to find out who the "Kolk" are. And, that's an interesting word, very different.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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A very intriguing story. It maintained my interest from beginning to end. Very well written, the story flowed smoothly. I need to find out who the "Kolk" are. And, that's an interesting word, very different.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I was looking for a term that meant 'collective'. I found 'kolkhoz' which is Russian for a collective farm. Bill
