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Comment from
DanielEkine
Very comprehensive and unique piece. Great job.
My best part, "I hate you too...please pass the bread?"
"Surely, you must be speaking about someone else?"
"Don't be ridiculous. What would you know about hate?"
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
Seriously, it's dark before 6AM these days. I might have done a load of laundry, but that would be against my religion.
Comment from
rjuselius
hhaha! lol! i just love the twist in the end although the poem is going in that direction. i also like the last line!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
Glad you were around to throw the ball around in the playground.
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