Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Looney's Loos"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
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Comment from c_lucas
The hand writing is on the bathroom wall. The mess is from some of those who used the facilities. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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The hand writing is on the bathroom wall. The mess is from some of those who used the facilities. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thanks bro Charly, much appreciate the wonderful review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Some people you just have to bash right over their heads with a message before they'll even begin to "see the light", Geoff. And even then, they still might not get it at all.
Kinda like a lot of reviewers here on FanStory.
~Dean
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Some people you just have to bash right over their heads with a message before they'll even begin to "see the light", Geoff. And even then, they still might not get it at all.
Kinda like a lot of reviewers here on FanStory.
~Dean
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Yep mate, not wrong at all. Wish I could use that precious Gif you sent me.
Comment from tfawcus
Oh dear, what a mess! I'm afraid that people are often more careless in these matters when in a public place than in the privacy of their own home. We sometimes found a similar story in my own workplace, but pretty well exclusively in the male toilets.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Oh dear, what a mess! I'm afraid that people are often more careless in these matters when in a public place than in the privacy of their own home. We sometimes found a similar story in my own workplace, but pretty well exclusively in the male toilets.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thanks very much for coming by. These poems of the smelly kind will not go on for too much longer. Dean Kuch gave me a priceless Gif file I think he might have actually composed himself. let me know if interested.
Comment from Delahay
I didn't see your Is There a Piranha in the Loo but I did read Toodle Loo. This one seems to be a continuation of that one as well. I love the picture you chose to accompany this humorous effort. Not a pleasant subject but one we can all relate to.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I didn't see your Is There a Piranha in the Loo but I did read Toodle Loo. This one seems to be a continuation of that one as well. I love the picture you chose to accompany this humorous effort. Not a pleasant subject but one we can all relate to.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Thanks yet again hope you came through in time to get a little reward for your time. I think the rewards run out Sunday arvo in USA which I know is about now as I just caught a bro's broadcast on WTBI online and I know he does that at 4pm Eastern time Sunday. I record all of them and put them on my web site.
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I'm not sure if I got anything for it but it was fun to read.
Comment from 22allgood
This is a great poem with lots of humour. It is clever and to the point. It's a pity it didn't achieve the desired result at the workplace but I imagine it was appreciated by the other staff at least.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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This is a great poem with lots of humour. It is clever and to the point. It's a pity it didn't achieve the desired result at the workplace but I imagine it was appreciated by the other staff at least.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Hey are you sure we don't know each other? You have gone to town on my stuff AND I LOVE IT! Thanks heaps!
Comment from DSchlosser
It looks as though you had some pretty bad experiences at your work for these problems. The stories we could share about the way people behave behind a closed door would be pretty crazy. Nice poem! One question though. What is Satay?
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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It looks as though you had some pretty bad experiences at your work for these problems. The stories we could share about the way people behave behind a closed door would be pretty crazy. Nice poem! One question though. What is Satay?
Comment Written 07-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2013
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Satay is for example Peanut butter Sauce I think probably more associated with Thai Cuisine. I love Satay sauce. Thanks for the review stay with me Chapter 12 is coming.
Comment from DanielEkine
That is really true. Really funny and beautiful. The art work complements beautifully.
My best part,"I don't know if it's Satay,
Or Pumpkin Soup or Curry,
But the messes they produces,
Really makes me worry."
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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That is really true. Really funny and beautiful. The art work complements beautifully.
My best part,"I don't know if it's Satay,
Or Pumpkin Soup or Curry,
But the messes they produces,
Really makes me worry."
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Thanks mate glad you like!
Comment from rhonny
It is I can tell you...and some disabled toilets aren't much better either. Your words paint a vivid and nasty picture. Words and rhymes worked well.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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It is I can tell you...and some disabled toilets aren't much better either. Your words paint a vivid and nasty picture. Words and rhymes worked well.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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Hi, thanks for the review.
Funny you should mention Disabled toilets. My wife is disabled and in a wheelchair. The number of times we find shopping centre Disabled loos all messy is quite frequent. I think in the case of Disabled loos the cleaning staff should be more frequent in visiting to clean them as I think you would admit it is harder for handicapped folks to clean their own mess at times. We always try to leave the toilets clear of our own messes. I have another poem I wrote about this. I might run that soon. Touchy area I know. The next one might interest you I am sure as well. Thanks for the review.
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Yes I use disabled toilets too. I'm on a walking stick. I'll look for your next poem :O)
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One day at the shopping centre we saw a guy apparently able bodied come out of the Disabled loo...was about to say something then noticed he was an amputee for one of his hands I imagine it would have been difficult and embarrassing for him in the men's loo. Stay tuned.
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I mentioned in your chat on your profile I have to wait till tomorrow to run my other poem so stay tuned.
