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Geoff's Book Of Poultry

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Looney's Loos"
My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.

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Comment from MelB
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But the messes they produces, - produce[s]

Generally, the womens' bathrooms are cleaner than the mens' bathrooms, but there can always be an exception to the rule.

 Comment Written 29-May-2017

reply by the author on 29-May-2017
    Yeah and I was deliberate in the Messes they produces mate all in the character of the poem. And others seem to agree about the women being cleaner than the men most of the time hehe. Thanks for the great review.
reply by MelB on 29-May-2017
    You're welcome.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Some people just literally don't care. When I worked at a restaurant for 17 years, part of our job was cleaning the bathrooms. The women's were not as bad. Blessings....

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Hi friend, I figured the men's would be worse. What we hate is when wr go to Restaurants the Disabled loo is invariably clogged up with cleaner's equipment. 😞
    Thanks for your great review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I laughed at this toilet messy business and no it's not the same if the ladies! Not my experience anyway! I hate using public conveniences. Your poem is lighthearted, well rhymed and funny, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Thanks Dolly, not sure we have met before, thanks for the great review. I felt like the women took more care of things hehe.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written fun and humorous poem. Although it is really disgusting to come into a messy bathroom. The poem made me smile, maybe this is why the messes never stop they think you are just making a joke.

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Interesting thought, Sis. Should have seen the signs I printed up and put in the cubicles hehe.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Yuck! It's Sunday morning. Give me a break. This was very funny though. I can't imagine what made you think of this, let alone write it.

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Well mate if you were the Occ Health and Safety Officer and had to deal with what I did you probably would have written something similar hehe. Thanks for the review, one more to come I think.
Comment from Sasha
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Sadly, I think it is the same all over the world. Sometimes I don't even trust those paper covers they provide in some public places. This is very clever and I have no idea how it could not have woke up you messy co-workers...but some people are naturally blind.

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Yep mate BLIND is so right! Yuck! More like SELFISH too! Not thinking of others who also have to share. Thanks
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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As a mother of four boys, I am pretty sure that many males need extra help in the bathroom. LOL Nothing seems to work. LOL I enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Thanks Barbara, yep I am guilty on the pee side anyway. Our neighbour used to be our cleaner she and her daughter had to put up with her husband and son...you gals reckon we boys should sit like you have to as well Oh me.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Ladies are prim and proper but when it comes to the bathroom, they do their business and if no one is next in line, it is left to the disgust of others, but if there is a line, it is spotless for the next

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    So sad. So you reckon the women offend as much as the fellas at times. You are the first to admit it. Thanks for coming along and sharing.
Comment from AnnieDawn
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I really enjoy your humor and the "accent" in which you write. That makes it all the more like able. Keep them coming and I will keep reviewing. Great job here.

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Yes Sis there is at least one more of these. Aprpeciate your review. And thanks for the prayers I see coming in the next review.
Comment from royowen
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I think they call it spay painting, I suppose the colour could maybe make a difference, plus the urinal floor can be an issue too mate. Beautifully written in an attempt to kerb these people's wayward habits, well done Geoff, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 28-May-2017

reply by the author on 28-May-2017
    Thanks Bro Roy. I was the Occ Health and Safety Officer at the time. I am not sure if I wrote about an accident I had in the office there. Silly seeing I was supposed to be O. H& S person, hehe. Should check and see if I wrote about it in my book. Lord Bless
reply by royowen on 28-May-2017
    Well done Bro