Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Looney's Loos"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
28 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
I think it is down to the belief that tasks like that are there for the cleaners to do. There is another possibility. Did the management provide a brush or other cleaning materials?
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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I think it is down to the belief that tasks like that are there for the cleaners to do. There is another possibility. Did the management provide a brush or other cleaning materials?
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Yes I think all the loos had stuff for someone to get inspired to use. I think it is just courtesy to clean up our messes if we make them as the cleaner is probably not gonna come around till after hours. Appreciate you coming by even for this smelly old poem of mine that has been around for years.
Comment from papa55mike
I am a retired custodian from an elementary school and the boys of today are disgusting. I have horror stories to tell. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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I am a retired custodian from an elementary school and the boys of today are disgusting. I have horror stories to tell. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks Bro glad you came by. Glad you relate as well. Just getting these oldies out for one more round.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about your experience of high concern of using toilet for males and you ever shocked with the loose; your reform works never worked; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This poem speaks about your experience of high concern of using toilet for males and you ever shocked with the loose; your reform works never worked; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Hi old friend. Good seeing you again. I am on Monthly in here on and off these days. Keep in touch. Appreciate the sympathetic review hehe.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Some people are, as this well written poem depicts, nasty when it comes to personal hygiene matters such as this one.
The picture is hysterical and the poem well written.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Some people are, as this well written poem depicts, nasty when it comes to personal hygiene matters such as this one.
The picture is hysterical and the poem well written.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Thanks mate so sorry no Rewards left on this. A real oldie this one.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
For the most part ladies are more aware of hygiene and common courtesies
though I'm sorry to say not perfect.
Just a walk past some men's toilets is enough to be grateful not to enter.
A poetic solution and some humour was worth a try but I suspect that
poetry is probably not the most effective device to capture attention and create
great change in the sensibilities of men, nor do I suspect are subtleties.
Perhaps a frank discussion may work better?????
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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For the most part ladies are more aware of hygiene and common courtesies
though I'm sorry to say not perfect.
Just a walk past some men's toilets is enough to be grateful not to enter.
A poetic solution and some humour was worth a try but I suspect that
poetry is probably not the most effective device to capture attention and create
great change in the sensibilities of men, nor do I suspect are subtleties.
Perhaps a frank discussion may work better?????
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thanks Shirley for coming by rewardless, sorry. At the time I was Occ Health and Safety Officer so I had a right I guess to throw out hints at my fellow workers. Loved the BIG SIX! Thanks. Hope Erin is doing ok. Also the farm.I wonder how you guys get on in the cold?
Comment from sunao
Oh, that's tragic! This surely made me chuckle. I would say for the ladies, there are always long lines, at least where I live. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and I am happy for the Recognized" accolade. Please keep up with the good work and have a brilliant day!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Oh, that's tragic! This surely made me chuckle. I would say for the ladies, there are always long lines, at least where I live. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and I am happy for the Recognized" accolade. Please keep up with the good work and have a brilliant day!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Thanks trying to find you on Fb remind me of your Fb nickname. Hope you caught the tune for Contemplation.
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Your so welcome!
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My fb name is Niangi Longo (Maggie)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I work retail and people are just disgusting when it comes to their bathroom stuff. There was one person who got mad at us for something and he went and peed in the changing rooms but at the time it was carpeted. Gross! Then you have the days you walk into the bathrooms and the walls are painted in poop. Yep, I'm a girl, it doesn't matter the gender for some of that. It's all gross
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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I work retail and people are just disgusting when it comes to their bathroom stuff. There was one person who got mad at us for something and he went and peed in the changing rooms but at the time it was carpeted. Gross! Then you have the days you walk into the bathrooms and the walls are painted in poop. Yep, I'm a girl, it doesn't matter the gender for some of that. It's all gross
Comment Written 03-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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Yep fer shore mate. Grosser and grosser for sure. I still remember years ago a church I was a part of someone cakme in and defecated (pooped) all over the aisle carpet. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Realist101
What a subject! LOL!!!! And up in the states they have a product you use in the restroom in the john to eliminate the odors. So prissy. So American. :D But your flow and rhyme in this make it a fun read Sankey. Funny. A hilarious point of view!
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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What a subject! LOL!!!! And up in the states they have a product you use in the restroom in the john to eliminate the odors. So prissy. So American. :D But your flow and rhyme in this make it a fun read Sankey. Funny. A hilarious point of view!
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thanks, friend for your lovely review. Much appreciated
Comment from Gert sherwood
Well Sankey
Very humorous, I say
To me there were many Mom's who gave up (trying to teach) their boys how to clean us their mess after using the toilet.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Well Sankey
Very humorous, I say
To me there were many Mom's who gave up (trying to teach) their boys how to clean us their mess after using the toilet.
Gert
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Yep for shore. Thanks for the lovely review.
Comment from bookishfabler
I haven't had curry in quite some time, but I know what that does to person's insides if spicy enough. This is a very cute poem, like a limerick. It put a smile on my face.
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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I haven't had curry in quite some time, but I know what that does to person's insides if spicy enough. This is a very cute poem, like a limerick. It put a smile on my face.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thanks new friend, glad it gave you a bit of a giggle.
