Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Frankly, I am so happy you made it. What a story, so sorry to read about your misfortune. Yet we have to say, thank God you are alive. And able to write. I have to go and check see if this is part of the novel or no. Terry.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013

Thanks and follow me as I
lead you on a special trip...
I will teach and amaze...
Reach and touch...
And lastly, I will allow
you into ME!!!
Ricky.

reply by tbacha58 on 14-Aug-2013

I really did not understand what you meant on the very last verse......I will allow you into... .ME.can you explain/ Thanks T.

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013

"allow you into me!":
My mind!
Ricky.

reply by tbacha58 on 14-Aug-2013

thanks, this dealing with an elderly of 76....hugs Terry

Comment from mizzkris20

Excellent

Your poem is very original and made a great read. It definitely shows that you can handle your problems face to face..Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013

Thanks "mizz for that and I'll
see you in the wrestling ring on TV!!
ricky1024.

Comment from Starlit Ink

Excellent

The poem is delightfully fresh and unusual. It has a lot of whimsy and irony as it looks at the pitfalls of life, and how they can interrupt the minds flow of words. It seems that some bad things happened, but that you are taking them on and not letting them control you. Very original write (and title.)

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013

Thanks Star and blessings
of heath, too, 2 U!!
Ricky.