thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Another Day"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
5 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
This is definitely a tragically sorrowful poem. I cannot even imagine the sadness of having one of my children or my grandchild that gravely ill. You convey the speaker's worry and sadness well. Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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This is definitely a tragically sorrowful poem. I cannot even imagine the sadness of having one of my children or my grandchild that gravely ill. You convey the speaker's worry and sadness well. Brooke
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2013
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those were some sad days for me .I look back on them and know what a wonderful God we serve. thank you for your review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Now here I sit in this hospital room
with a heart full of gloom
Because I know the angle of death
will be arriving soon
oh, this is indeed sad - we suffer when our
children suffer - and hate them to go through
any pain.
good luck with the contest.
Margaret
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Now here I sit in this hospital room
with a heart full of gloom
Because I know the angle of death
will be arriving soon
oh, this is indeed sad - we suffer when our
children suffer - and hate them to go through
any pain.
good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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thank you
Comment from barkingdog
It is terrible sometimes what parents have to endure went their children are stricken by a formidable disease.
Your descriptions are graphic(head swollen stitched up tight; face black and blue; heart full of gloom)and heartbreaking.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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It is terrible sometimes what parents have to endure went their children are stricken by a formidable disease.
Your descriptions are graphic(head swollen stitched up tight; face black and blue; heart full of gloom)and heartbreaking.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review God bless
Comment from Jean Lagace
Why would that be if the baby is in a hospital and is being treated properly? The angle of death makes this piece quite depressing. I am no doctor but I feel the verse "How come I let them do that to you" a bit unfair.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Why would that be if the baby is in a hospital and is being treated properly? The angle of death makes this piece quite depressing. I am no doctor but I feel the verse "How come I let them do that to you" a bit unfair.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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At the time I knew it was just exploratory surgery the mass was between the two parts of the brain they knew that they were not going to be able to remove it.God bless,thank you for the review I was sad and depressed when I wrote this.
Comment from playinaround
Profoundly sad. This poem gave me the chills. Very well written. The beginning was confusing, then came the sorrowful story. This poem will be a real contender in this contest. Very well worded.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Profoundly sad. This poem gave me the chills. Very well written. The beginning was confusing, then came the sorrowful story. This poem will be a real contender in this contest. Very well worded.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review and kindness God bless
