My memory box
A poem, no specific form32 total reviews
Comment from rouskin
All of these boxed memories shocked me.
So I forgive myself this little theft.
You brought back my childhood memories
Great write
Thank you for sharing and have a great week
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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All of these boxed memories shocked me.
So I forgive myself this little theft.
You brought back my childhood memories
Great write
Thank you for sharing and have a great week
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a great week, Ine
Comment from in777wr#
A well written poem. You will be surprised at what we can find in some of those boxes. This poem brought me back to my recent discovery of old keepsakes That I recently found. Your poem brought back some memories. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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A well written poem. You will be surprised at what we can find in some of those boxes. This poem brought me back to my recent discovery of old keepsakes That I recently found. Your poem brought back some memories. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine.
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You're welcome.
Comment from fairy77
WoW!Amazing rhyme and free verse about lost romantic letters.Wonderful and pleasing to the eye:)Wonderful story poem:)Really unique!beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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WoW!Amazing rhyme and free verse about lost romantic letters.Wonderful and pleasing to the eye:)Wonderful story poem:)Really unique!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Thanks ever so much for this lovely six, you made my day.
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I really enjoyed it:)thanks for writing it:)Have a great night:)beth hugs.
Comment from David Graham
An interesting and insightful poem. Good work. I think we all have had moments like this. I wonder what will transpire when I am gone and my kids go through my things.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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An interesting and insightful poem. Good work. I think we all have had moments like this. I wonder what will transpire when I am gone and my kids go through my things.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend seems you found a part of your past in this box , it must be hard for you but this makes you the person that you are well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Hello my friend seems you found a part of your past in this box , it must be hard for you but this makes you the person that you are well done regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Treischel
An intimate look into your past and a surprising disclosure of your own larceny. A revealing contrast between mom and dad. Sounds like a sad childhood.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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An intimate look into your past and a surprising disclosure of your own larceny. A revealing contrast between mom and dad. Sounds like a sad childhood.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from cvcopac
Like you I keep the facts close to me, and no matter how many times they're reviewed they can shock, or amaze anew. I think you wrote this pretty much as it came to mind--and it contains some real gems. I enjoyed it. Kenny
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Like you I keep the facts close to me, and no matter how many times they're reviewed they can shock, or amaze anew. I think you wrote this pretty much as it came to mind--and it contains some real gems. I enjoyed it. Kenny
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from chasennov
'My Memory Box.' A secret room entered is a mystery detected, which very few people will understand, or comprehend. It is always rather exited as hurriedly as possible. Throw away the key!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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'My Memory Box.' A secret room entered is a mystery detected, which very few people will understand, or comprehend. It is always rather exited as hurriedly as possible. Throw away the key!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine.
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You too, Ine.
Comment from CarloG
I love situations where we are reading things that are shocking, it makes our mind work in mysterious ways, since the narrator memory bis getting worse these letters trigger her earliest memories which are more valuable than a pile of gold.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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I love situations where we are reading things that are shocking, it makes our mind work in mysterious ways, since the narrator memory bis getting worse these letters trigger her earliest memories which are more valuable than a pile of gold.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine.
Comment from Joan E.
What a revelation about your childhood! You made the "memory box" come alive as you described its emotional contents. Yes, you are to be forgiven your minor theft. Your "shopping list" and "fridge" similes are quite telling. A fascinating piece of free verse. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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What a revelation about your childhood! You made the "memory box" come alive as you described its emotional contents. Yes, you are to be forgiven your minor theft. Your "shopping list" and "fridge" similes are quite telling. A fascinating piece of free verse. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks for your time and nice rating. Have a lovely week, Ine. Thanks ever so much for this lovely six, it made my day.
