My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from fastdigits
You wrote this one like a melody
that was played by angels sitting
on a cloud and the magical chords
floated down in wonderous song for
the world to hear.
Well done
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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You wrote this one like a melody
that was played by angels sitting
on a cloud and the magical chords
floated down in wonderous song for
the world to hear.
Well done
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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fastdigits, thank you so very much for this wonderfully generous review and rating :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
Great message in this rondeau!The rhyme and rhythm are perfectly executed and the way you have presented this is so attractive! Great job!
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Great message in this rondeau!The rhyme and rhythm are perfectly executed and the way you have presented this is so attractive! Great job!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mauial
This is a great spiritual poem. Love the refrain line. The message is made clear that despair will never win the fight if each dawn we awake with faith, no matter what the day before threw at us to tear it down.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This is a great spiritual poem. Love the refrain line. The message is made clear that despair will never win the fight if each dawn we awake with faith, no matter what the day before threw at us to tear it down.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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mauial, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from gudbjorg
Even though your poem has a special flow and is outstanding in my opinion the message is greater that "faith restores" as it is impossible to please the Lord without faith. Instilling faith into the hearts of others is the greatest mission of all. Thank you so much for lifting up faith. You deserve 6 stars for the poem.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Even though your poem has a special flow and is outstanding in my opinion the message is greater that "faith restores" as it is impossible to please the Lord without faith. Instilling faith into the hearts of others is the greatest mission of all. Thank you so much for lifting up faith. You deserve 6 stars for the poem.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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gudbjorg, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Dustybones
Very hopeful poem with inspiration of the light within. Love the colors you've chosen along with the spiritual green forest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Very hopeful poem with inspiration of the light within. Love the colors you've chosen along with the spiritual green forest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Dusty, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from madhatter1977
I thought this was quite amazing, it flowed so well and has a great message about hope triumphing over despair. Not come across the rondeau style before but I thought you used the structure brilliantly without breaking the theme or style of the poem - very well done!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I thought this was quite amazing, it flowed so well and has a great message about hope triumphing over despair. Not come across the rondeau style before but I thought you used the structure brilliantly without breaking the theme or style of the poem - very well done!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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madhatter, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this poem and for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome - it was inspiring! Keep writing. :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'My Faith Restores' is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's faith should in due time, give her God's blessed reward. It was a privilege to review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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'My Faith Restores' is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's faith should in due time, give her God's blessed reward. It was a privilege to review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Duchess, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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Brooke. as always you're very welcome.
:-the Duchess
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
I've never told you this, but I tend to put you on a pedestal. I think of you as a shining example of what a true Christian is meant to be.
Your poems reflect your joyful and optimistic attitude about life. Your helpful and heartfelt critiques touch so many people in such a positive way. And, yes, your faith restores - constantly!
Sincerely,
Lou
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Hi Brooke,
I've never told you this, but I tend to put you on a pedestal. I think of you as a shining example of what a true Christian is meant to be.
Your poems reflect your joyful and optimistic attitude about life. Your helpful and heartfelt critiques touch so many people in such a positive way. And, yes, your faith restores - constantly!
Sincerely,
Lou
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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What a lovely thing to say, Lou. Thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Brooke,
Your poem is beautifully worded with a story that affects us all. Humans are creatures of the light, and most of us feel better on a bright sunny day than we do when it's gloomy and overcast. The metaphor is excellent, and the same principle applies to our faith. When faith sags, hope and joy can abandon us; whereas, when my faith is strong, God provides me with sunlight and joy. It is an outstanding poem, and I enjoyed it. Your visuals are superb.
Curtis
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Brooke,
Your poem is beautifully worded with a story that affects us all. Humans are creatures of the light, and most of us feel better on a bright sunny day than we do when it's gloomy and overcast. The metaphor is excellent, and the same principle applies to our faith. When faith sags, hope and joy can abandon us; whereas, when my faith is strong, God provides me with sunlight and joy. It is an outstanding poem, and I enjoyed it. Your visuals are superb.
Curtis
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Curtis :-) Brooke
Comment from me_tudor
This was a great poem, Brooke. Yes, the new dawn brings a new day and new hope for me too. Some days more than others. I loved the picture and the green background. They made me think of rejuvenation.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This was a great poem, Brooke. Yes, the new dawn brings a new day and new hope for me too. Some days more than others. I loved the picture and the green background. They made me think of rejuvenation.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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me tudor, thank you so much :-) Brooke
