My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This rondeau is quite uplifting and a perfect format for the message that it carries. This faith does keep balance in a world so tipped by the most unthinkable reality we live in today. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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This rondeau is quite uplifting and a perfect format for the message that it carries. This faith does keep balance in a world so tipped by the most unthinkable reality we live in today. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Bill, thank you so very much :-) I truly appreciate your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from teafor2
adewpearl--Your combination of allits (Ds; Ws; Ss) and firm
end rhymes let reader(s) know that despite any and all
bumps in the road or bruises to ego/body...you have an ace up your sleeve: "Faith;" the sustainer of man. teafor2
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adewpearl--Your combination of allits (Ds; Ws; Ss) and firm
end rhymes let reader(s) know that despite any and all
bumps in the road or bruises to ego/body...you have an ace up your sleeve: "Faith;" the sustainer of man. teafor2
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, teafor2 :-) Brooke
Comment from costellsgirl33
"At times when troubles last too long
and keep the cloak of darkness drawn,
when sorrow has me in its sights,
my faith restores".
That is my favorite part of your lovely lovely poem. This is such a beautiful and uplifting poem about faith and it was very touching to me. You did a great job as always. This is actually my first time reading a poem from you without a picture of Sawyer.
Great job
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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"At times when troubles last too long
and keep the cloak of darkness drawn,
when sorrow has me in its sights,
my faith restores".
That is my favorite part of your lovely lovely poem. This is such a beautiful and uplifting poem about faith and it was very touching to me. You did a great job as always. This is actually my first time reading a poem from you without a picture of Sawyer.
Great job
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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costellsgirl, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star. You should look further back in my portfolio - I posted for three and a half years before Sawyer was ever born. LOL Brooke :-)
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You are welcome Brooke! I just became a member of Fanstory a few months ago, so that's why, lol! I will take a look and read more of your work ;)
Comment from david bell
My faith returns when I read your words. They lift my spirit above my despair. You reminded me that God is there, with open arms, waiting to comfort me.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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My faith returns when I read your words. They lift my spirit above my despair. You reminded me that God is there, with open arms, waiting to comfort me.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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David, thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments and generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Brooke, what a lovely, upbeat poem of faith. I particularly love these lines: "and life, once huddled in the night, /
begins to stir with morning light / as if the day had never gone." And I always appreciate your clear description of the form you're using - an excellent teaching tool for the readers. Love, Jeanie
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Brooke, what a lovely, upbeat poem of faith. I particularly love these lines: "and life, once huddled in the night, /
begins to stir with morning light / as if the day had never gone." And I always appreciate your clear description of the form you're using - an excellent teaching tool for the readers. Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Jeanie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from misscookie
I thank you for this uplifting poem for I like many who took time to read this poem will find a strong message within your write. With God,all things are possible.
thank you for sharing.
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I thank you for this uplifting poem for I like many who took time to read this poem will find a strong message within your write. With God,all things are possible.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Miss Cookie, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
Eloquent and beautiful, Brooke, and I think the rondeau is a particularly effective choice for a faith poem, because its nature brings the lines above back home in the refrain, much like the faith holding things together. A marvelous entry, my friend :-).
Mike
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Eloquent and beautiful, Brooke, and I think the rondeau is a particularly effective choice for a faith poem, because its nature brings the lines above back home in the refrain, much like the faith holding things together. A marvelous entry, my friend :-).
Mike
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much, Mike :-) Brooke
Comment from JM daSilva
No matter how long the night, another day beckons. That's what I thought about when I read your poem. We seem to see the world optimistically no matter what, you and me. I suffer, but I always think of what Scarlett O'Hara said...
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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No matter how long the night, another day beckons. That's what I thought about when I read your poem. We seem to see the world optimistically no matter what, you and me. I suffer, but I always think of what Scarlett O'Hara said...
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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JM, thanks so much for the video link and your generous sixth star. I've always loved that part of the movie :-) Brooke
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Pleasure.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
This illustrates faith so very well. This is truly beautiful. It is more than well written. You have a command of the true forms that I wish I could match by 10%!
Fantastic. Thank you for the post.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This illustrates faith so very well. This is truly beautiful. It is more than well written. You have a command of the true forms that I wish I could match by 10%!
Fantastic. Thank you for the post.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, Kingsrookviii :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great picture of the morning sun shining through the trees, a perfect match for your rondeau. A nice life message to finish off with
just as sorrow seems to strong
my faith restores.
Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
valda
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Great picture of the morning sun shining through the trees, a perfect match for your rondeau. A nice life message to finish off with
just as sorrow seems to strong
my faith restores.
Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
valda
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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valda, thank you so very much for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
