My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Brooke
This poetry speaks of survival and perseverance. It flows
beautifully and is a good motivational piece as well. The
attached photo is a calming and picturesque accent that
compliments and enhances the message. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Well Done ~ Brooke
This poetry speaks of survival and perseverance. It flows
beautifully and is a good motivational piece as well. The
attached photo is a calming and picturesque accent that
compliments and enhances the message. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Ron, thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your repeats and rhymes, along with the shifting rhythms. The picture and color background you selected are so congruent with your Rondeau. I particularly admired the contrast between "huddled" and "stir," along with your "song(s)" and "cloak" metaphors plus your personification of "sorrow". Best wishes in the faith contest with this uplifting piece. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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I enjoyed your repeats and rhymes, along with the shifting rhythms. The picture and color background you selected are so congruent with your Rondeau. I particularly admired the contrast between "huddled" and "stir," along with your "song(s)" and "cloak" metaphors plus your personification of "sorrow". Best wishes in the faith contest with this uplifting piece. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Joan, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes, your thoughtful review and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from elchupakabra
First, I must thank you for the poetry lesson, I did not know what a rondeau was. Second, it was very well executed. I enjoyed the strong imagery as always, but I also really enjoyed the uplifting theme as well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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First, I must thank you for the poetry lesson, I did not know what a rondeau was. Second, it was very well executed. I enjoyed the strong imagery as always, but I also really enjoyed the uplifting theme as well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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elchupakabra, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your kind contest wishes as well as your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Brooke, this is a lovely poem and a wonderful entry for the competition. I'm having trouble with the rhyming words but realise it is down to the accent, because you frequently have trouble with mine as well. I guess that's one of the beauties of fan story. My very best wishes for the competition, Giddy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Brooke, this is a lovely poem and a wonderful entry for the competition. I'm having trouble with the rhyming words but realise it is down to the accent, because you frequently have trouble with mine as well. I guess that's one of the beauties of fan story. My very best wishes for the competition, Giddy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Giddy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the Rondeau poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. The rhyming is good. The flow is smooth as I see nothing that I would change in this piece.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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This piece meets the criteria of the Rondeau poem. The rhyme scheme is on point. The rhyming is good. The flow is smooth as I see nothing that I would change in this piece.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Righteous Riter, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
Excellent Rondeau Brooke and an excellent choice for the faith contest. Perfect line used for the repeating line.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Excellent Rondeau Brooke and an excellent choice for the faith contest. Perfect line used for the repeating line.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Teresa, thank you so very much for your encouragement and generosity, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Joy Graham
I love love this faith poem for this contest. I was disappointed with the results of the last contest and sure appreciate you bringing true faith to the table this time around. To me faith is serious not something to be joked about. I love that you used the rondeau, one of my favorite poetry forms. Excellent iambic meter, excellent repeating line. You have a winner in my eyes :)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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I love love this faith poem for this contest. I was disappointed with the results of the last contest and sure appreciate you bringing true faith to the table this time around. To me faith is serious not something to be joked about. I love that you used the rondeau, one of my favorite poetry forms. Excellent iambic meter, excellent repeating line. You have a winner in my eyes :)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Joy, thank you so very much :-) I do hope this positive message represents people of faith well. I so appreciate your generous sixth star and encouraging comments :-) Brooke
Comment from reconciled
Hi Brooke...-smile- exceptionally well written...How...? is your faith restored. seriously...I want to know. love you Michael
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Hi Brooke...-smile- exceptionally well written...How...? is your faith restored. seriously...I want to know. love you Michael
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Michael, thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Zue65
My dear friend the notes are definitely informative, but I read this poem not for its rhymes because you are master in that genre, nothing to comment on that. But I love the message in it, our faith restores everything and that is more important than all the rhymes combined. This is actually my mantra when I write, more of the message than the form, otherwise I will be guilty of painting by the numbers alone. You however is a master of both , the vessel and the content matched perfectly. God bless.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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My dear friend the notes are definitely informative, but I read this poem not for its rhymes because you are master in that genre, nothing to comment on that. But I love the message in it, our faith restores everything and that is more important than all the rhymes combined. This is actually my mantra when I write, more of the message than the form, otherwise I will be guilty of painting by the numbers alone. You however is a master of both , the vessel and the content matched perfectly. God bless.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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nassus, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Brooke this is great...my faith restores...I like the refrain...there is no place where dark belongs......within a heart that hears hopes song.......I love the hope of this................
God bless
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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Brooke this is great...my faith restores...I like the refrain...there is no place where dark belongs......within a heart that hears hopes song.......I love the hope of this................
God bless
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2013
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kiwijenny, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
