My Faith Restores
a rondeau185 total reviews
Comment from Jade Lawson
Another beautiful and inspirational poem. It is an excellent entry for this contest.
as if the day had never gone... that is my favourite line.
You indeed convey very well what faith is suppose to be, how a positive attitude and thoughts can make all the difference in maintaining our hope and a positive outcome. It was a pleasure to read, and really inspirational.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Another beautiful and inspirational poem. It is an excellent entry for this contest.
as if the day had never gone... that is my favourite line.
You indeed convey very well what faith is suppose to be, how a positive attitude and thoughts can make all the difference in maintaining our hope and a positive outcome. It was a pleasure to read, and really inspirational.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Angel, thank you so much for your thoughtful review and wonderfully generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Brooke, a refreshing poem of hope. We need a strong faith to guide us through the dark night and perhaps even darker days at times. I loved the form of this poem. Beautiful illustration too. Hope you are well. luv jada
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Hi Brooke, a refreshing poem of hope. We need a strong faith to guide us through the dark night and perhaps even darker days at times. I loved the form of this poem. Beautiful illustration too. Hope you are well. luv jada
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Jada, thank you so very much, my friend :-) I always appreciate hearing from you :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This poem is gently uplifting. It tells us that if you have faith, you can face anything, even in our darkest moments. The style so suited your words, and your chosen illustration is as warming as your poem. Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This poem is gently uplifting. It tells us that if you have faith, you can face anything, even in our darkest moments. The style so suited your words, and your chosen illustration is as warming as your poem. Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Sandra, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning brooke
how did I miss this entry
the rondeau is such a wonderful format
I have to admit it takes me time to execute
your refrain worked very well
thank you for sharing your poetic talent
the presentation and illustration are lovely
yes
this is poetry
ann marie
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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good morning brooke
how did I miss this entry
the rondeau is such a wonderful format
I have to admit it takes me time to execute
your refrain worked very well
thank you for sharing your poetic talent
the presentation and illustration are lovely
yes
this is poetry
ann marie
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks so very much, ann marie :-) Brooke
Comment from Stephen Wolff
The form is well chosen for your theme and the whole piece is very well executed. I have no suggestions for improvement. Its great as it is!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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The form is well chosen for your theme and the whole piece is very well executed. I have no suggestions for improvement. Its great as it is!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Stephen, thank you so very much for your most thoughtful review and for your generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Uniqusatya
Each dawn with a new hope.Awake and Arise is well expressed.Gotto know a new form of writing,thanks for that.
Good read.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Each dawn with a new hope.Awake and Arise is well expressed.Gotto know a new form of writing,thanks for that.
Good read.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Uniqusatya, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Brocha1
I love your more serious poems. They have so much content and depth.I loved the first line "dawn by dawn". the rhyme scheme here is perfectly gentle and so suited to the theme.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I love your more serious poems. They have so much content and depth.I loved the first line "dawn by dawn". the rhyme scheme here is perfectly gentle and so suited to the theme.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you, Brocha, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Bayberry
This is a very uplifting poem that's full of wisdom. We all need to be encouraged throughout our lives and taking a moment to read such a beautiful faith poem as this is an excellent way to gain a few moments of restful peace. Thank you so much for this lovely experience, Brooke. :>
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This is a very uplifting poem that's full of wisdom. We all need to be encouraged throughout our lives and taking a moment to read such a beautiful faith poem as this is an excellent way to gain a few moments of restful peace. Thank you so much for this lovely experience, Brooke. :>
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, rhymster :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
Excellent form for this faith poem. My faith restores id the best line. Strong repeating lines. I think this will be a strong contender. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Excellent form for this faith poem. My faith restores id the best line. Strong repeating lines. I think this will be a strong contender. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Ine, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes and for your thoughtful review of this faith poem :-) Brooke
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most welcome and I meant what I wrote, Ine
Comment from DR DIP
I love it when you talk technical (author's notes)
iambic tetrameters, iambic dimeter, refrain lines..its all there!! lol
The poem is classic "adewpearlistic"..i'm sure ,like my stuff, that one could be confronted with a hundred poems with unknown authors and they could conclusively pick your style and rhyming . is a good thing for your poetry is your signature and no one has the right tgo forge it!!
xxdip
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I love it when you talk technical (author's notes)
iambic tetrameters, iambic dimeter, refrain lines..its all there!! lol
The poem is classic "adewpearlistic"..i'm sure ,like my stuff, that one could be confronted with a hundred poems with unknown authors and they could conclusively pick your style and rhyming . is a good thing for your poetry is your signature and no one has the right tgo forge it!!
xxdip
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much, dip, for the smile and the review :-) Brooke
