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Comment from mickbey
I like this poem, there seems to be an extra passion in every stanza, really digs deep into the emotions, the last stanza finished it well, "Awaken that which sleeps" is my favorite line for some reason, lastly, the author notes took this rating from a five to a six, the effort and passion make it possible for the reader to 'feel' the lines, very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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I like this poem, there seems to be an extra passion in every stanza, really digs deep into the emotions, the last stanza finished it well, "Awaken that which sleeps" is my favorite line for some reason, lastly, the author notes took this rating from a five to a six, the effort and passion make it possible for the reader to 'feel' the lines, very enjoyable.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello
it was the title that caught my eye
I am a believer in souls and protecting souls
your words are very much poetic
your theme speaks for itself
your presentation illustration and format are all marvelous
and your own artwork too
what more can a reader ask for
a true pleasure to read
thank you for sharing such talent
ann marie
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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hello
it was the title that caught my eye
I am a believer in souls and protecting souls
your words are very much poetic
your theme speaks for itself
your presentation illustration and format are all marvelous
and your own artwork too
what more can a reader ask for
a true pleasure to read
thank you for sharing such talent
ann marie
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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Thanks!
Comment from G.B. Smith
C'mon. Tell me your secrets. Tell me your dreams
take me beyond my own wild imagination...
will ya? huh?
I've tried, but you don't like em. Too bad, because they are from what heart I have
Bear
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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C'mon. Tell me your secrets. Tell me your dreams
take me beyond my own wild imagination...
will ya? huh?
I've tried, but you don't like em. Too bad, because they are from what heart I have
Bear
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
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Yeah yeah...
Comment from NadineM
Loved you poem, Jewell, the message being one I would also write. Well, I feel it too, even when I don't write it! Truly what matters more to me is what's behind the mask, what's deep in the soul, crying, screaming to be released.
Great expression of your heart! Great rhymes too! Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Loved you poem, Jewell, the message being one I would also write. Well, I feel it too, even when I don't write it! Truly what matters more to me is what's behind the mask, what's deep in the soul, crying, screaming to be released.
Great expression of your heart! Great rhymes too! Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thanks Nadine. I feel I may have offended some writers. Hope not.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jewel,
This work has such lovely artistic flare. Loved the easy pull in this work. As I read I was thinking how this one seems very hypnotic, or even like those crystal balls that give fortune tellers their words to share.
Your post weaves much like that - I could almost envision the sensations of falling under your spell, thus the words released and the reactions I give part of the gift of sharing.
I enjoyed how you penned this one - and understand your author notes too well...sigh:)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Hi Jewel,
This work has such lovely artistic flare. Loved the easy pull in this work. As I read I was thinking how this one seems very hypnotic, or even like those crystal balls that give fortune tellers their words to share.
Your post weaves much like that - I could almost envision the sensations of falling under your spell, thus the words released and the reactions I give part of the gift of sharing.
I enjoyed how you penned this one - and understand your author notes too well...sigh:)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Wow...thanks Maureen.
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Wow...thanks Maureen.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Well, I'm not really a poet but what I write is from the heart because I have no knowledge of HOW to write a poem. You might try Pg 2- Wedding Nightmare, A Demon Instead of a Loving Husband on Pg2 Day & Night I Wait, Behind Closed Doors. There's more. Good poem. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Well, I'm not really a poet but what I write is from the heart because I have no knowledge of HOW to write a poem. You might try Pg 2- Wedding Nightmare, A Demon Instead of a Loving Husband on Pg2 Day & Night I Wait, Behind Closed Doors. There's more. Good poem. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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' HAVE to read that!
Thanks!
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' HAVE to read that!
Thanks!
Comment from kiwijenny
Reveal the treasured secrets .....that lie far behind your eyes........these are honest entreaties.....I like the heart felt poems too . My pet peeve is people that tell a fake tale that has nothing to do with with their own life.....I am a truth seeker too
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Reveal the treasured secrets .....that lie far behind your eyes........these are honest entreaties.....I like the heart felt poems too . My pet peeve is people that tell a fake tale that has nothing to do with with their own life.....I am a truth seeker too
God bless
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Amen. Thanks!!
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Amen. Thanks!!
Comment from Jackarrie
Well you certainly put the emotion into this piece,
Is there one thing which lies waiting
Way beneath your strong facade
Perhaps your deepest longing
That which takes you straight to God?
We all have a facade, and underneath it we have dreams and wishes, some realistic and some not. perhaps our deepest longing is to understand God?
Well written, I enjoyed it. mary
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Well you certainly put the emotion into this piece,
Is there one thing which lies waiting
Way beneath your strong facade
Perhaps your deepest longing
That which takes you straight to God?
We all have a facade, and underneath it we have dreams and wishes, some realistic and some not. perhaps our deepest longing is to understand God?
Well written, I enjoyed it. mary
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you.
I think you could be correct. ;)
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Thank you.
I think you could be correct. ;)
Comment from Jokerswild
This is a fantastic piece of work. Everything comes together beautifully to create the whole. The flow is amazing. Your ability to actually place the emotion on the page is a wonderful "surprise". Thank you for sharing this intimate look into love.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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This is a fantastic piece of work. Everything comes together beautifully to create the whole. The flow is amazing. Your ability to actually place the emotion on the page is a wonderful "surprise". Thank you for sharing this intimate look into love.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Wow! Thanks for your vote of confidence and the beautiful stars!!
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Wow! Thanks for your vote of confidence and the beautiful stars!!
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You are more than welcome. This piece deserved it.
Jackie
Comment from Sasha
I am not a poet so, sadly you will never hear mine unless you read prose since that is my area of expertise. This is a fantastic poem and I enjoyed it immensely. I felt I was peering into a secret journal not meant for my eyes.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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I am not a poet so, sadly you will never hear mine unless you read prose since that is my area of expertise. This is a fantastic poem and I enjoyed it immensely. I felt I was peering into a secret journal not meant for my eyes.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Awww! Your prose is more poetic than you think"
Thanks!
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Awww! Your prose is more poetic than you think"
Thanks!
