Thirty Seconds Till Disconnect
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Comment from MelReyn
Yes, I see what you mean about this one going the other way now. This is painfully beautiful. It has touched me deeply. My goodness, but I'm at a loss for words. You've brought tears to my eyes.
I gotta go hug my kids now. WHew.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Yes, I see what you mean about this one going the other way now. This is painfully beautiful. It has touched me deeply. My goodness, but I'm at a loss for words. You've brought tears to my eyes.
I gotta go hug my kids now. WHew.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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AWE Now that makes this all worth while if you are going to hug your kids Don't forget your cat and your dog also if you have one..Now if you have a gold fish hugging it might be a bit difficult just say when you go may you SIP Thats SWIM IN PEACE
oops was just informed by my Hawaiian Mermaid not to forget to hug your bird if you have one and give him a FIP FLY IN PEACE Geezee I better cut this off now the pig farmer NEXT DOOR JUST READ THIS AND IM NOT GOING THERE !!!! BUT IF I DID IT WOULD BE "RIS" OK OK GOTTA GO LOL
TK
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LOL, I'm back from much snuggle-hugging loving. Socrates decided it would be best to stay out of the giggling mess. No pigs here, but there are lots of trees I could hug. ;)
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AH YES A TREE TO SNUGGLE NOW IF I AM CORRECT I DO BELIEVE I HAVE WRITTEN SOMEWHERE ABOUT JUST THAT HUGGING A TREE HUMM OR WAS THAT A COMMODE
WHEN I HAD A WEE TO MUCH SPIRIT IN ME LOL THAT WAS LONG AGO THOUGH FYI LOL
TK
Comment from nomi338
Wow! This is such a personal story, I feel as though I have witnessed a very personal conversation between family members who have deep love and respect for each other. The love is so evident that it can be felt. I pray that you and your loved ones have the very best family reunion known to anyone.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Wow! This is such a personal story, I feel as though I have witnessed a very personal conversation between family members who have deep love and respect for each other. The love is so evident that it can be felt. I pray that you and your loved ones have the very best family reunion known to anyone.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Yes is a bit personal my friend but I know there are others who have the same feelings as I ..Glad you took the time to read and comment on this my friend. Now to proceed with something that will make all chuckle I hope
TK
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You are very welcome old friend. Show us what you got.
Comment from Treischel
Wow! What a wonderful idea. One call allowed to heaven. You really know how to turn a sad situation into a tender intimate moment. This is a fabulous Write. It tugged at my heart. Even though you kept it light, I shed a tear. Very well done to bring in the entire troupe of personal pain, each one a wound in itself: son, wife, cat, and dog.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Wow! What a wonderful idea. One call allowed to heaven. You really know how to turn a sad situation into a tender intimate moment. This is a fabulous Write. It tugged at my heart. Even though you kept it light, I shed a tear. Very well done to bring in the entire troupe of personal pain, each one a wound in itself: son, wife, cat, and dog.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Mr T was an emotional write did not know how well it would go over as it is a bit melancholy but seems to have gone on well Thank you so much for the galaxy of stars Kind Sir
TK
Comment from lindalcreel
There were just a couple of misspelled words in this, but the pure honesty and warmth made me forget that. What a beautiful way to say hello and goodbye to your son. I too believe there is an afterlife, and one day I will meet my son there. God Bless and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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There were just a couple of misspelled words in this, but the pure honesty and warmth made me forget that. What a beautiful way to say hello and goodbye to your son. I too believe there is an afterlife, and one day I will meet my son there. God Bless and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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awe thank you so very much for taking the time to read and comment on this I must go over the spelling thought my spell check was working but I guess like me it ain't lol Thanks agin for your kind words
tk
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I miss things all the time. One day I'm going to get it right. You'll be fine.
Comment from Supe
I can't believe this. I have to go and wash the tears that are running down my cheeks. It is a heartbreaking piece. So well done. Keep you token for a while.
"Me too dad.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I can't believe this. I have to go and wash the tears that are running down my cheeks. It is a heartbreaking piece. So well done. Keep you token for a while.
"Me too dad.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Wow I thank you so much!! Really did not know if I should go ahead and post this or not as I felt maybe it was a bit to personal and not go over too well with the reader..I am not a great writer of story type prose but you have made my day and with six stars to go along with this ..I thank you from way down inside
tk
Comment from lancellot
It is a little sad, but I guess that means you did a good job of involving the reader into your world.
A phone call to my son Brian in heaven telling{} his mom will be with him shortly
- This line appears to missing a word (him) perhaps
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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It is a little sad, but I guess that means you did a good job of involving the reader into your world.
A phone call to my son Brian in heaven telling{} his mom will be with him shortly
- This line appears to missing a word (him) perhaps
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you for reading and commenting on this I will check on that missing word right now thanks for the heads up on it
TK
Comment from krys123
I believe this is one of your best TK. Very sincere and heartfelt in this whole writing. I enjoyed the conversation between you and your son. I'm sad to see that all of them are gone. I can feel the really true essence of both you talking on the phone. You've written it in genuine reality of the piece through your words. Every line was felt to be true. The rhythm was very well done and made it easy for the piece to read. Thanks for sharing their TK. Must've been hard, I think. You have a good woman God bless.
"Don't let it get you down it's only castles burning to find out that your yearning will only come around." A little Neil Young for you there, pal.
AK
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I believe this is one of your best TK. Very sincere and heartfelt in this whole writing. I enjoyed the conversation between you and your son. I'm sad to see that all of them are gone. I can feel the really true essence of both you talking on the phone. You've written it in genuine reality of the piece through your words. Every line was felt to be true. The rhythm was very well done and made it easy for the piece to read. Thanks for sharing their TK. Must've been hard, I think. You have a good woman God bless.
"Don't let it get you down it's only castles burning to find out that your yearning will only come around." A little Neil Young for you there, pal.
AK
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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awe what nice a review you have given me AK I really did not know if I should have posted this or not.. but have gotten some good reviews..And for those who ask the premise may have been slanted real but all the characters are real. Love Neil Young too Thank you my friend for this review..
TK
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You're welcome TK
AK
Comment from lakeport
thirty seconds till disconnect, indeed what a very precious phone call with many memories, I enjoyed listen in,God bless you. Lakeport,
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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thirty seconds till disconnect, indeed what a very precious phone call with many memories, I enjoyed listen in,God bless you. Lakeport,
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much lakeport If only we could make that call .. wonder what we say Maybe just what I had written think?
TK
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your welcome.lakeprt.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow TK this is really something. It sent chills down my spine. Did that really happen? Did somehow you communicate with your son in Heaven that your wife was about to join him?
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Wow TK this is really something. It sent chills down my spine. Did that really happen? Did somehow you communicate with your son in Heaven that your wife was about to join him?
~Teresa~
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Well Teresa I must say some poetic license was used but all the characters including the animals were real. When this was written wife had already passed on .. Something just let this flow from the portals of my mind and a phone seemed the right instrument to use to get my feelings across.. Thank you so much for reading and the six star rating you awarded me
TK
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You deserved every one of them my friend.
Comment from gaangel62
OK....why did you have to post this today....you have me crying so hard...I can't type...beautiful write....that's all I can say....Big Hugs.....Angie....find someone to love, you shouldn't keep that heart hidden.....Hugs....Angie
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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OK....why did you have to post this today....you have me crying so hard...I can't type...beautiful write....that's all I can say....Big Hugs.....Angie....find someone to love, you shouldn't keep that heart hidden.....Hugs....Angie
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Awe you are too sweet my lil peach..Did not want to make you cry sorry I promise will write a smiling one next ok BTW I have a beautiful Hawaiian Mermaid who can't keep her fins off me lol or my hands off her hehehehe Thank you so much for the galaxy of stars you have rewarded me HUGS
TK
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Congrats on you and Hawaian Mermaid....
Hugs
Angie
