Thirty Seconds Till Disconnect
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Comment from luna_catkins
the depth of love. timeless. touching talk full of emotion. exquisite lead of remembrance with beloved. battling to live on with such painful loss.
tears fall down. feeling your vulnerable solitude.
if i could...i would.
such a beautiful beautiful write.
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the depth of love. timeless. touching talk full of emotion. exquisite lead of remembrance with beloved. battling to live on with such painful loss.
tears fall down. feeling your vulnerable solitude.
if i could...i would.
such a beautiful beautiful write.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2013
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, my, now THIS is a tear-jerker. I haven't bee on the site as much as I'd like and I am WAY behind, but I'm so glad I read Ginger's poem, which tipped me off to this one. Simply exquisite. I haven't a six left this week, or I would surely assign one to this majestic poem!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Oh, my, now THIS is a tear-jerker. I haven't bee on the site as much as I'd like and I am WAY behind, but I'm so glad I read Ginger's poem, which tipped me off to this one. Simply exquisite. I haven't a six left this week, or I would surely assign one to this majestic poem!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review Yes it was a bit of a tear jerker for the writer as well .. Sorry took me this long to respond but been having some internet problems here hope now resolved again thank you
TK
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My pleasure - for sure!
Comment from Cookie333
sniff, sniff, you gotta warn people when you write something like this my friend, gee-whiz. I am so glad I have tissues handy. What a very nice piece my friend, I am so happy they are still in your heart and you mind.
thank you for sharing such a personal piece,
k
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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sniff, sniff, you gotta warn people when you write something like this my friend, gee-whiz. I am so glad I have tissues handy. What a very nice piece my friend, I am so happy they are still in your heart and you mind.
thank you for sharing such a personal piece,
k
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Cookie it was written from the heart thats for sure and even made a tear drop run down my cheek as well Thanks so much again and I know if they were here all of them wife Cheryl son Brian Happy and that darn cat Shylow would give you a great big Hug ok maybe the dog a lick and Shylow a cats meow hehehe
an
Comment from ann marie mazz
oh my god TK
first
allow me to let your entry stand
there is nothing I could ever say or add
your words and story go beyond emotional
there are no words
secod
I very much commend you in being able to put this together
with that said
it is my hope that writing such words and dealing with such feelings somehow helped you digest this all
I know I said I would let your entry stand but I will say just this one comment
your creativity and originality shine
this is a work of art and very clever
may your remaining token be safe
hold this entry close and dear
thank you for sharing
you leave us touched
ann marie
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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oh my god TK
first
allow me to let your entry stand
there is nothing I could ever say or add
your words and story go beyond emotional
there are no words
secod
I very much commend you in being able to put this together
with that said
it is my hope that writing such words and dealing with such feelings somehow helped you digest this all
I know I said I would let your entry stand but I will say just this one comment
your creativity and originality shine
this is a work of art and very clever
may your remaining token be safe
hold this entry close and dear
thank you for sharing
you leave us touched
ann marie
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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wow an a mazz-ing review you have awarded me...I am humbled by your words and yet a smile does cross my face as I feel you have enjoyed this look into my past.. FYI All are real and yes all have passed.. But the pain has been, not erased, but much lessened. For I have beautiful a Hawaiian Mermaid ,though only 5 Ft 2, stands 10 ft tall with her love and caring that she gives me. Add to that 2 Shih Tzu,1 Rottweiler 2 Macaws, 1 crazy green parrot that hates me and 2 cats LIFE IS GOOD IN THE ISLANDS
HUGS
TK
Comment from Louise Michelle
How clever this is! I believe avidly that we will join our loved ones once we pass over and you have portrayed such a delightful poem with wit. A really enjoyable read. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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How clever this is! I believe avidly that we will join our loved ones once we pass over and you have portrayed such a delightful poem with wit. A really enjoyable read. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH LOU ....APPRECIATE YOU TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND YOUR NICE COMMENTS ENJOY THE WEEKEND
TK
Comment from l.raven
OK When I stop crying I will review this. This is sooo very sad. I know how it feels to lose loved ones. I lost my husband and my brother not to long ago. But we will see them again. Truly one of the most touching poems I have read. Wish I had a six for you... ****** Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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OK When I stop crying I will review this. This is sooo very sad. I know how it feels to lose loved ones. I lost my husband and my brother not to long ago. But we will see them again. Truly one of the most touching poems I have read. Wish I had a six for you... ****** Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2013
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YOUR KIND WORDS ARE MUCH BETTER THAN ANY 6 I COULD HAVE RECEIVED LINDA I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS AS IT DID COME FROM PART OF MY LIFE . THANK YOU AGAIN SO VERY MUCH
TK
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You are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from kiwijenny
I am still crying ... I don't have a six but you deserve one ,no you deserve several sixes.....this is beautiful..............God bless you very much.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I am still crying ... I don't have a six but you deserve one ,no you deserve several sixes.....this is beautiful..............God bless you very much.
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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AWE KIWI YOUR WORDS TOUCH ME DEEPLY I SO APPRECIATE YOU TAKING THE TIME TO READ AND COMMENT ON A LIL PIECE OF MY PAST
HUGS
TK
Comment from Jackarrie
A sad, sad story of such tragic loss, and a great way to present the whole picture of the phone call. No matter how we choose to communicate with our loved ones that has passed on is a personal thing. The conversation with your boy in Heaven is a lovely way to describe your innermost feelings of the need to communicate, I love it.
Well done, and I hope you are coping with your loss. Mary
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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A sad, sad story of such tragic loss, and a great way to present the whole picture of the phone call. No matter how we choose to communicate with our loved ones that has passed on is a personal thing. The conversation with your boy in Heaven is a lovely way to describe your innermost feelings of the need to communicate, I love it.
Well done, and I hope you are coping with your loss. Mary
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you very much Jackarrie for you kind words relating to this Am very happy you enjoyed it
TK
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with words to touch the heart. Words telling of a time of being together and the good memories left behind. A good writing to make one feel blessed.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Good poem with words to touch the heart. Words telling of a time of being together and the good memories left behind. A good writing to make one feel blessed.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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thank you so very much I must say yes I am blessed with great memories
TK
Comment from Pili Pubul
I wish I could give you a six but FS don't let me. I am moved beyond words, as you know my son died a year ago, so did my husband a few years before , so I relate. I admire your very real dialogue, I felt there.
I admire your faith and your humor regardless comes trough. Hugs. Pili
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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I wish I could give you a six but FS don't let me. I am moved beyond words, as you know my son died a year ago, so did my husband a few years before , so I relate. I admire your very real dialogue, I felt there.
I admire your faith and your humor regardless comes trough. Hugs. Pili
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much for these kind words Pili My empathy over flows my dear as I write these words to you I am also humbled by the many who have related to this work of mine. I almost did not post it as thought it might be taken as too personal but now I am glad I did
Thank you again and here is a big ole Tarnished hug HUG HUG HUG hell you deserve three
tk
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You are precious... I am so glad you posted it , Hugs .
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hey I'm so glad you read it lol
tk
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Me too. Hugs. Pili
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FYI SOMEONE THE HAWAIIAN MERMAID REALLY WROTE AN ANSWER TO THIS CALLED THE LAST RARE TOKEN ITS ON THE FRONT PAGE RIGHT UNDER DISCONNECT I THINK YOU MIGHT LIKE IT HUGS TK
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Unfortunately is not there now ...
