Moan
A Moan-Oh-Tetra...39 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Jo
This was funny and put a smile on my face. I think I'll have my husband read this. Thanks for sharing and hopefully it will get better.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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This was funny and put a smile on my face. I think I'll have my husband read this. Thanks for sharing and hopefully it will get better.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Many thanks Bobby Jo...yes the key is to get him in on the act...well, at least for the first 5 verses. LMAO
Cheers P
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A very explicit and bold poem. The writer is a bit mean wanting the enjoyment but making it one sided. The end is a disappointment for the partner in this situation. The last two lines say it all. A bit mean. But your author notes give a good explanation. Yes, my retinas are intact. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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A very explicit and bold poem. The writer is a bit mean wanting the enjoyment but making it one sided. The end is a disappointment for the partner in this situation. The last two lines say it all. A bit mean. But your author notes give a good explanation. Yes, my retinas are intact. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL Not a bit of meanness on this writer's behalf...if you knew the ratio, well...trust me when I say I am outnumbered with the figures. So I figure I have a little catching up to do. Glad you STILL have your retinas. Haha
Cheers P
Comment from Hitcher
A man would need a bloody chainsaw and a kick-ass cold chisel before he could even get to the prize, BUT! Some men live for the challenge and rise, rise, RISE to the occasion ready to reap and harvest, divide and conquer over and over again...No Escape :) LOVED This one my frustrated friend, oh sorry, you got yours ha ha
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A man would need a bloody chainsaw and a kick-ass cold chisel before he could even get to the prize, BUT! Some men live for the challenge and rise, rise, RISE to the occasion ready to reap and harvest, divide and conquer over and over again...No Escape :) LOVED This one my frustrated friend, oh sorry, you got yours ha ha
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL Yeah I sure got mine, but not before he DIDN'T fucking well get his this time. 'Bout time I evened up the scores a little. I have a way to go. Thanks for the sixer.
Cheers P
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Phillippa
This poetry is STEAMING HOT!! It is a very pleasant
surprise that you chose to share this slice of you.
The passion is intense and images are satisfying.
Thank You for the thrill ~ Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Well Done ~ Phillippa
This poetry is STEAMING HOT!! It is a very pleasant
surprise that you chose to share this slice of you.
The passion is intense and images are satisfying.
Thank You for the thrill ~ Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Thanks my friend...glad I could fog up your screen for a few minutes. LOL
Cheers P
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Comment from Spitfire
LOLOLOLOL Well, you get the moan-er-message. I hope this isn't biographical. You look too young to turn to stone. But it does look as if you're putting the blame where it belongs- men! Favorite lines:
Let tongue become thy phallic clone
Such size and length I've rarely known
Ah, those were the days. Hail the mid thirties.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOLOLOLOL Well, you get the moan-er-message. I hope this isn't biographical. You look too young to turn to stone. But it does look as if you're putting the blame where it belongs- men! Favorite lines:
Let tongue become thy phallic clone
Such size and length I've rarely known
Ah, those were the days. Hail the mid thirties.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Unfortunately on the odd occasion this IS biographical to a degree.
Lets just say I have a lotta catching up to do. Haha
Cheers and thanks for stopping by
P xoxo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Ok, for the genre I actually think this is written very well and doesn't say so much that a child would be shocked.
I like the line:
Mmmmm, stop the clock and hold the phone
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Ok, for the genre I actually think this is written very well and doesn't say so much that a child would be shocked.
I like the line:
Mmmmm, stop the clock and hold the phone
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL Well it wasn't in the Childrens Poetry category...
Thanks for stopping by. Cheers P
Comment from Cookie333
A very consistent theme, sigh ( or is that moan?) haha
This one conjure up some steamy images, but I suspect they was the intent
per your note
Thank you
L
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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A very consistent theme, sigh ( or is that moan?) haha
This one conjure up some steamy images, but I suspect they was the intent
per your note
Thank you
L
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Haha...yep I think it was a moan you heard not a theme although moaning was the theme...oh I don't know! LOL
Thanks for stopping by. Cheers P
Comment from despiser
A sixer for old times sake lol. Bunny Wabby reminisces in da renasaince. Dats bewy cute Bunns, caw to do a sampow? Heehee. Much enjoyed Bunns.
Much enjoyed
-D 6x
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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A sixer for old times sake lol. Bunny Wabby reminisces in da renasaince. Dats bewy cute Bunns, caw to do a sampow? Heehee. Much enjoyed Bunns.
Much enjoyed
-D 6x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL No sound effects...but I'd be gwad to do a funken bunken wabbity wabbit mimefest sometime...LOL
Glad you stopped by to hear the bunny moans. LOL
Vewwy cute weeview and sixer...HUGs da Wabbit XXX
Comment from tbacha58
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Its so cute, yet in reality there is a message behind this poem. I am sure you are a winner, as it has a nice double meaning poem. Terry.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. Its so cute, yet in reality there is a message behind this poem. I am sure you are a winner, as it has a nice double meaning poem. Terry.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL Oh I was the winner in the end here...LMAO
Thanks for stopping by.
Cheers P
Comment from Connie C
I have a feeling this is one of the two that you mentioned to me a long time ago that might just stir a little reaction from others, you naughty girl, you.
There's nothing like a poem like this to heat things up a little, huh? This is the kind of stuff that wakes up the site. I love the whole thing, but I really like the ending where your spring has sprung and the birds have flown and even if he's hard, too bad. I had to read this to Bill. We both got a good laugh out of that last stanza. And Bill, by the way, said to tell you he is sending you a big hug. Hmmm . . . Should I be jealous?
Keep this kind of stuff coming, Sweetie. It's obviously well-received and such a refreshing change from what's usually posted.
Big Hugs from me too!
Connie xoxoxo
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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I have a feeling this is one of the two that you mentioned to me a long time ago that might just stir a little reaction from others, you naughty girl, you.
There's nothing like a poem like this to heat things up a little, huh? This is the kind of stuff that wakes up the site. I love the whole thing, but I really like the ending where your spring has sprung and the birds have flown and even if he's hard, too bad. I had to read this to Bill. We both got a good laugh out of that last stanza. And Bill, by the way, said to tell you he is sending you a big hug. Hmmm . . . Should I be jealous?
Keep this kind of stuff coming, Sweetie. It's obviously well-received and such a refreshing change from what's usually posted.
Big Hugs from me too!
Connie xoxoxo
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL Yes this is the culprit. I am glad you shared a moan with Bill...or was it a little more? Haha
Glad I could release this as a family favourite...well for mums and dads at least LMAO
Hugs Phillippa
xoxoxo
Nothing for Bill...he got the "moans" so to speak hahahahaha
