All Dressed In White
A guest's point of view89 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Janilou,
LOL. Oh the bodyguard knows the truth and loves Ed. A floosy he choice to wed, but you took care of that. You write in an entertaining active style. Well done.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Dear Janilou,
LOL. Oh the bodyguard knows the truth and loves Ed. A floosy he choice to wed, but you took care of that. You write in an entertaining active style. Well done.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much! I am honored by the six stars and your comments as well! Many thanks. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it this much!
Jan
Comment from david bell
I know that you might not believe me, but my wife was an hour late for our wedding. I was worried that she had come to her senses, and ran for her life. Great story.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I know that you might not believe me, but my wife was an hour late for our wedding. I was worried that she had come to her senses, and ran for her life. Great story.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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LOL Glad she came through for you. :-) Thanks for the great review and I'm so glad you enjoyed my little tale.
Comment from marre5
Great twist and totally unexpected. Funny voice, very sarcastic and sophisticated. Great creative take on mundane subject. Very entertaining. No suggestions except proofread for errors.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Great twist and totally unexpected. Funny voice, very sarcastic and sophisticated. Great creative take on mundane subject. Very entertaining. No suggestions except proofread for errors.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Many thanks! I am honored by the six stars. I have read and re-read! If you have any suggestions or noticed any errors specifically, I would be delighted to know what they were so I can go in and correct them. Again, thank you so much!
Jan
Comment from Spitfire
I had to read it through twice after I finished it and picked up the clues that the speaker is a dog. Bodyguard wa one tip-off. Then Ed squats done... Very clever use of puns thoughout. A great entry because it is so unique.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I had to read it through twice after I finished it and picked up the clues that the speaker is a dog. Bodyguard wa one tip-off. Then Ed squats done... Very clever use of puns thoughout. A great entry because it is so unique.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Many thanks for the great review! It is much appreciated.
Jan
Comment from God's Writer
A very interesting story my friend. Even though having this happen isn't funny at all. I found a good laugh in the way you write it. Thank you
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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A very interesting story my friend. Even though having this happen isn't funny at all. I found a good laugh in the way you write it. Thank you
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks! :-)
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting story. I usually like to see more dialogue, but that doesn't detract from the story in general. This is good and I wish you the best in your contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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This is an interesting story. I usually like to see more dialogue, but that doesn't detract from the story in general. This is good and I wish you the best in your contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you. :-)
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My pleasure.
Comment from Sahana Kamath
I could not stop laughing once I read the ending. What a twist to the tale :). The characters of Ed, Angel & Cindy have come out very nicely. Your novel is a complete package - humor, mystery, revenge, suspense, romance, suspicion, loyalty.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I could not stop laughing once I read the ending. What a twist to the tale :). The characters of Ed, Angel & Cindy have come out very nicely. Your novel is a complete package - humor, mystery, revenge, suspense, romance, suspicion, loyalty.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much. I was delighted to read your comments. :-) I'm very happy to hear how much you enjoyed it.
Jan
Comment from N.K. Wagner
What else would a perfect bodyguard do? Man's best friend - and he knows it. You did an excellent job with this, Janilou. Good luck. :) nancy
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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What else would a perfect bodyguard do? Man's best friend - and he knows it. You did an excellent job with this, Janilou. Good luck. :) nancy
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much! :-)
Jan
Comment from visionary1234
oh I just LOVED the wry running-commentary style of this one, though I was starting to become puzzled by WHO was speaking and what his/her role was, so was relieved when you enlightened us. What a fun entry!
:)Sharyn
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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oh I just LOVED the wry running-commentary style of this one, though I was starting to become puzzled by WHO was speaking and what his/her role was, so was relieved when you enlightened us. What a fun entry!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Jan
Comment from Sarah78
Absolutely hilarious. I loved the voice. It was knowing, tough and funny. Ed's bodyguard was absolutely the most loyal bodyguard a man could have and smart too. The twist ending was terrific. I just loved that! 'She looked so delectable all dressed in white--just like a bone." Cindi is one serious piece of work. I also loved it when she denies having anything to do with the death of Ed's second wife. me thinks the doggie doth protest too much! This story was so consistently funny and original, I actually laughed out loud when I reached the end. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Absolutely hilarious. I loved the voice. It was knowing, tough and funny. Ed's bodyguard was absolutely the most loyal bodyguard a man could have and smart too. The twist ending was terrific. I just loved that! 'She looked so delectable all dressed in white--just like a bone." Cindi is one serious piece of work. I also loved it when she denies having anything to do with the death of Ed's second wife. me thinks the doggie doth protest too much! This story was so consistently funny and original, I actually laughed out loud when I reached the end. Excellent job.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much for the six stars and the fabulous review. :-) To know you laughed out loud just made my day.
Again, thank you!
