Karma
Look Out, it Bites...36 total reviews
Comment from catch22
Wow, dear P, I have to give you six stars based on the originality of the subject matter alone! But wait, it's a really outstanding story line in a poem, and the sing-songy beat in your lines makes this one bounce along. Never thought I'd read something like this for a FS contest, but it was refreshing to say the least.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Wow, dear P, I have to give you six stars based on the originality of the subject matter alone! But wait, it's a really outstanding story line in a poem, and the sing-songy beat in your lines makes this one bounce along. Never thought I'd read something like this for a FS contest, but it was refreshing to say the least.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Hey Gail, thanks so much, I appreciate you stopping by with a sixer. Refreshing yes, a winner? Not a f**king hope honey.
I like to feature the f-bomb way too much for any straight laced judges.
Cheers for the sixer.
Phillippa xo
Comment from Maureen's Pen
ROFL - Jeeze girl this is hilarious.
The imagery alone had me laughing like a fool. Add in the rhythm and rhyme and the white coats are coming to get me.
Loved this one - karma is a bitch and she's wearing pointy stilettos, ouch.
Brilliant rhymer as always - you make it look bloody easy and it takes me days to rhyme. Yikes..
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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ROFL - Jeeze girl this is hilarious.
The imagery alone had me laughing like a fool. Add in the rhythm and rhyme and the white coats are coming to get me.
Loved this one - karma is a bitch and she's wearing pointy stilettos, ouch.
Brilliant rhymer as always - you make it look bloody easy and it takes me days to rhyme. Yikes..
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much Maureen. Yep, karma is a right bitch for sure.
Cheers P
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Comment from Quillian
I can't believe that nasty photo. This is something right out of scared straight. Piranhas with the munchies. Really clever, whacked and totally original. Take a bow, Missy.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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I can't believe that nasty photo. This is something right out of scared straight. Piranhas with the munchies. Really clever, whacked and totally original. Take a bow, Missy.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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LOL Thanks so much for a corker review.
Cheers p
Comment from Spiritual Echo
There's something that totally tickles my fancy. Imagining piranhas and sharks consuming the weed, then getting a case of the muchies made me giggle.
Yes there is a message, but I'm still enjoying thee picture you painted in my mind.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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There's something that totally tickles my fancy. Imagining piranhas and sharks consuming the weed, then getting a case of the muchies made me giggle.
Yes there is a message, but I'm still enjoying thee picture you painted in my mind.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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LOL Thanks my friend, much appreciate you stopping by Ingrid.
I always like to paint a pretty picture for my readers...heehee
Hugs P
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Comment from l.raven
OMG Phillippa. Piranha chowing on pot. The munches!!! LOL..I guess it all came full circle ya nut...Pot heads.. piranha..pot heads...piranha..yum yum.. LOL Karma!!! Ya know I love it. The whole damn think is great!! Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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OMG Phillippa. Piranha chowing on pot. The munches!!! LOL..I guess it all came full circle ya nut...Pot heads.. piranha..pot heads...piranha..yum yum.. LOL Karma!!! Ya know I love it. The whole damn think is great!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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LOL Thanks Linda, appreciate the sixer mate.
Yes it came full circle for sure. Hugs P xo
Comment from ravenblack
Pirahana's with the munchies, limbs flying everywhere as if a jack-in-the-box were placed at the bottom of a can of Pringles - witty, rhythmic and just what the hell were you smoking when you wrote it?!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Pirahana's with the munchies, limbs flying everywhere as if a jack-in-the-box were placed at the bottom of a can of Pringles - witty, rhythmic and just what the hell were you smoking when you wrote it?!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Thanks my friend. Much appreciate your time and for stopping by.
Oh, and I was STRAIGHT when I wrote this. LMAO
Hugs P
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Then Don't ever even sip a beer.
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I ONLY review when I'm drunk.
LMAO
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Well, it probably helps. Except for the usual suspects that make you see double no matter what.
Comment from despiser
Awww wook, da cute widdo fuckin Bunny wight a poem...
OOOH dats scawy Bunns! But are you really sure karma happens this way? A vivid bunnimation, but the point is, karma takes on an infinity of manifestations.
Very good Bunny Wabby
-Dee xx
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Awww wook, da cute widdo fuckin Bunny wight a poem...
OOOH dats scawy Bunns! But are you really sure karma happens this way? A vivid bunnimation, but the point is, karma takes on an infinity of manifestations.
Very good Bunny Wabby
-Dee xx
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Fankyou bewwy much DEE...Bunnimation? wmpo you SO funny...wuv Bunny Wabby xxx
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Ha! Just talking about you - all good of course lol
Comment from cvcopac
Short and sweet and full of meat--not only a cute story: bad guy's get theirs, but charmingly written--good bait--good catch. You wrote a great meter and verse in one stroke. Kenny
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Short and sweet and full of meat--not only a cute story: bad guy's get theirs, but charmingly written--good bait--good catch. You wrote a great meter and verse in one stroke. Kenny
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Awww Kenneth, thanks my friend. Glad you liked this meaty drama. LOL
Cheers P
Comment from Tonulak
Is that how it's done down under? Giving the munchies to the fish, now that is poetic justice!:) This was humourous and very nicely done with rhyme and rhythm--Ted
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Is that how it's done down under? Giving the munchies to the fish, now that is poetic justice!:) This was humourous and very nicely done with rhyme and rhythm--Ted
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Mmmm, not sure LOL. This was a fictional write for a change although I AM familiar with some weed terminology LOL.
Thanks for an enchanting review my friend.
Hope you're well.
Hugs P
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Comment from dmt1967
As always my friend this poem was both funny and entertaining I really love your work it is so refreshing and enjoyable to read good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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As always my friend this poem was both funny and entertaining I really love your work it is so refreshing and enjoyable to read good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your thoughtful comments as always.
Cheers P
