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~ Freedom ~

A Lune poem

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Comment from adewpearl
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Solid pairing or photo and poem, which is in good 5/3/5 format for the Lune
nice pairing of flying/freedom
you paint a lovely picture of the birds in flight while creating a mood of freedom :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
    Thank you Brooke!! :)
Comment from Paul Sienicki
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Yes and yes you love your freedom as everyone else, like birds who reign and gracefully fly over mediocre. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 14-Aug-2013
    Thank you so much for the great comment and rating!! I really appreciate you taking the time to stop by and read my poem. Feel free to come back and read my many others sometime. :)
Comment from ann marie mazz
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hello heidi

your format is true to the contest rules and form
your theme is marvelous
no one could argue with freedom
oh if only to glide

but then again
all we have to do is close our eyes

thank you for sharing
good luck with the contest
ann marie

PS
it's amazing how these brief entries and styles tell a mini story

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    Thank you so very much xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    Thank you so very much xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    Thank you so very much xoxo
Comment from me_tudor
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This was pretty good. You might think about picking a picture of a bird flying to go with it. That would spice it up. I've read a few of the poems for this contest and just about everyone is accentuating their work with art. Just a suggestion. But a good poem too.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    Thanks for the suggestion on artwork. I appreciate the entire comment & rating!! xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    Thanks for the suggestion on artwork. I appreciate the entire comment & rating!! xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    Thanks for the suggestion on artwork. I appreciate the entire comment & rating!! xoxo
Comment from Jackarrie
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This is a lovely lune Poem the 5-3-5 syllables are all correct.

Flying gracefully
Birds gliding
Freedom reigns above

This poem has a lovely feel to it as well as visual well done. Mary

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this....thank you so very much!! xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this....thank you so very much!! xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2013
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this....thank you so very much!! xoxo
Comment from olivia22
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Flying gracefully
Birds gliding
freedom reigns above.
Can you explain this further.are you trying to freedom is only above or it is also above. Just a little clarification. Keep writing. good work.

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 Comment Written 06-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
    I'm not really sure exactly how to take your comment as far as clarifying things. However, I'm sorry if it was in some way confusing to understand. I truly appreciate the time and honesty tho. That means a great deal to me. After all, without the help of others we simply can't improve ourselves in writing. :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is a good lune poetry contest entry. It has the perfect 5-3-5 syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
    Thank you for your nice comment and review on my Lune. I have never attempted one before so I truly appreciate your comment........xoxo
Comment from Sasha
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I read the rules and it appears your poem was written with the correct number of syllables and in the correct order. Delightful poem and a great entry for the contest too.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
    As always, thank you so very much my sweet friend!! xoxo
Comment from Martin Chan
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Yes, your first attempt is perfect for a Lune poetry. I don't see any that needs corrections. A good writing with a good theme. I wish you best luck for your contest entry.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
    Thank you very much my friend. I really appreciate your kind words.......xoxo
Comment from invisible.touch
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The simplicity of your poem adds to the subject matter perfectly. There is grace in freedom. And in freedom we find we are able to fly. Thank you for the lovely experience of your writing, this is lovely. invisible.touch x

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2013
    Thank you my friend.....xoxo