~His All-He Gave~.
He died and was resurrected, for you & me...101 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Jo
I would give you a six if I had one. I absolutely loved this. It speaks of truth beyond our hearts. I love the picture of the lion, lamb and Jesus. I also loved the color you used as background and words. Great work.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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I would give you a six if I had one. I absolutely loved this. It speaks of truth beyond our hearts. I love the picture of the lion, lamb and Jesus. I also loved the color you used as background and words. Great work.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks Bobby Jo. I am very happy that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Treischel
I don't have any more 6s to give, or this exquisite rendition of the crucifixion would surely get it. Your words paint the graphic imagery of that epic event vividly. Your composition is well crafted and stunning. The use of color to depict scripture quotes from the words of Jesus provides further compelling depth. A fabulous spiritual poetic epistle!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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I don't have any more 6s to give, or this exquisite rendition of the crucifixion would surely get it. Your words paint the graphic imagery of that epic event vividly. Your composition is well crafted and stunning. The use of color to depict scripture quotes from the words of Jesus provides further compelling depth. A fabulous spiritual poetic epistle!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks Mr. T, the fact that a poet such as you thinks so highly of it is six stars enough for me, my friend. Even better!
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Know the truth, now you possess a clue
that will lead you to a life brand new
For, it's your choice as to what to do-
There for the asking-- it's up to you...
a beautifully written spiritual verse, Dean - so heart-breaking to read, knowing your words to be true.
I recently watched the old epic film Ben Hur and cried when it came to the scene where Jesus carried his cross.
(Had I a six it would be yours, my talented friend)
Margaret
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Know the truth, now you possess a clue
that will lead you to a life brand new
For, it's your choice as to what to do-
There for the asking-- it's up to you...
a beautifully written spiritual verse, Dean - so heart-breaking to read, knowing your words to be true.
I recently watched the old epic film Ben Hur and cried when it came to the scene where Jesus carried his cross.
(Had I a six it would be yours, my talented friend)
Margaret
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks, Margaret, but my talents and achievements pale in comparison to yours. So, coming from you, this really means a lot, and I sincerely thank you!
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer delivers a message that touches my heart. This piece reminds me of all the things Jesus went through for this world. This message is just flat out awesome. Thank you for sharing.
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The writer delivers a message that touches my heart. This piece reminds me of all the things Jesus went through for this world. This message is just flat out awesome. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, my friend, for such a beautiful review...
Comment from Maria C.
Wow, this is magnificent. The story told well. I like the fact that you color coded it. The picture is great too. Good rhyming quatrains. This is a definite six.
Blessings,
Maria C.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Wow, this is magnificent. The story told well. I like the fact that you color coded it. The picture is great too. Good rhyming quatrains. This is a definite six.
Blessings,
Maria C.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, Maria. I am touched by your generous review...
Comment from chasennov
'His All-He Gave.' I enjoyed reading this poem you have created here.
The time was now nigh, yea, getting close;
As the Son lay dying-on the post). I also thought it was well formulated.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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'His All-He Gave.' I enjoyed reading this poem you have created here.
The time was now nigh, yea, getting close;
As the Son lay dying-on the post). I also thought it was well formulated.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much chasennov my friend. I appreciate that!
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You're very welcome, Dean.
Comment from Jane Johnson
How beautiful! You did a wonderful job. Words flowed well and the artwork was extremely appropriate and touching. How can I bore you with a review after writing something so elegant? I have no place to go with my thoughts. I am awed by your writing. God is surely looking upon you! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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How beautiful! You did a wonderful job. Words flowed well and the artwork was extremely appropriate and touching. How can I bore you with a review after writing something so elegant? I have no place to go with my thoughts. I am awed by your writing. God is surely looking upon you! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Ah, dearest Jane, I am never bored by such a glowing review as you have so graciously bestowed upon my work here. I am touched by your generosity...
Comment from rjuselius
"Know the truth, now you possess a clue
that will lead you to a life brand new
For, it's your choice as to what to do-
There for the asking-- it's up to you..."
our faith is as firm as our sins. thank you lord for not giving in.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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"Know the truth, now you possess a clue
that will lead you to a life brand new
For, it's your choice as to what to do-
There for the asking-- it's up to you..."
our faith is as firm as our sins. thank you lord for not giving in.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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I thank you, rebekka, for taking time out of your busy day to read and review this for me...
Comment from JM daSilva
One day somebody asked me whether Jesus was a historical figure or not. I told him that it didn't matter. Archetypes are powerful things. Jesus is a great archetype.
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One day somebody asked me whether Jesus was a historical figure or not. I told him that it didn't matter. Archetypes are powerful things. Jesus is a great archetype.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, JM, for that intelligent assessment and for the kind review...
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Oh, it wasn't kind. I just expressed what I feel. You are a great friend. I'll support you in anything you do, including faith-related issues.
Comment from Selina Stambi
God bless the good pastor!
Beautifully formatted to frame immortal truth, simply and poignantly phrased.
I love the altar call in the final stanza.
Amen, brother! :)
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God bless the good pastor!
Beautifully formatted to frame immortal truth, simply and poignantly phrased.
I love the altar call in the final stanza.
Amen, brother! :)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much, Reach. I always enjoy seeing a review from you, especially a favorable one! :)
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Have I EVER given you an unfavourable one, Dean?? :)
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Nope, come to think of it, you haven't, lol... :D
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SO THERE ....!! :)
