~ Flowers ~
A Haiku on flowers16 total reviews
Comment from olivia22
wow! short and so real.
Beauty all around
flowers blooming everywhere
The scent fill my heart.
Oh! i wish i had more of this. yes, flowers represent beauty. The scent fills my heart, i think it is trying to place the heart in a resting position that is please with nature and real love. I do appreciate this work.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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wow! short and so real.
Beauty all around
flowers blooming everywhere
The scent fill my heart.
Oh! i wish i had more of this. yes, flowers represent beauty. The scent fills my heart, i think it is trying to place the heart in a resting position that is please with nature and real love. I do appreciate this work.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much Olivia!! xoxo
Comment from Brumar97
You painted a pretty picture with your words. I would have liked more description of the beauty... maybe Blue flowers bloom everywhere? Just a thought... thank you for sharing:)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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You painted a pretty picture with your words. I would have liked more description of the beauty... maybe Blue flowers bloom everywhere? Just a thought... thank you for sharing:)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much!! xoxo
Comment from krys123
A very good job and if it's the requirements for the contest and a haiku. It leads easy and is very well penned. Thank you for sharing and have a good day.
AK
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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A very good job and if it's the requirements for the contest and a haiku. It leads easy and is very well penned. Thank you for sharing and have a good day.
AK
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for the great comment and review. Its very much appreciated....xoxo
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You are so welcome and good luck in the contest.
Comment from lorijean
Beautiful artwork well worth writing about, I have dozens of roses in my garden at the moment and the perfume is intoxicating, well written and thank you for sharing....
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Beautiful artwork well worth writing about, I have dozens of roses in my garden at the moment and the perfume is intoxicating, well written and thank you for sharing....
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I love roses and the smell is so intoxicating!! Such beauty....thank you so much for the comment and review. xoxo
Comment from Jackarrie
This beautiful one has the right amount syllables of a 5-7-5 Haiku poem
Beauty all around
Flowers blooming everywhere
The scent fills my heart
Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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This beautiful one has the right amount syllables of a 5-7-5 Haiku poem
Beauty all around
Flowers blooming everywhere
The scent fills my heart
Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much my friend...xoxo
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this haiku except the first two lines should form a single thought
beauty abounds as
flowers blossom everywhere
their scent fills my heart
good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this haiku except the first two lines should form a single thought
beauty abounds as
flowers blossom everywhere
their scent fills my heart
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so very much my friend. Your comment and review mean a great deal to me.......xoxo
Comment from honeytree
I like both the art work and words for this contest.
The beauty within these flowers are really special.
The words written have described this beauty perfectly.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I like both the art work and words for this contest.
The beauty within these flowers are really special.
The words written have described this beauty perfectly.
Honey tree
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you Honeytree!! xoxo
Comment from Matthew M.
I think the first line can become stronger. Beauty all around can be vague without knowing first too much what the poem was about. The title helps, but then it could be something else. I would suggest looking at a first line that can be more specific. The poem is really good with the last line appealing to the sense of smell and the middle line telling us what we see. Just something to consider for that first line.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I think the first line can become stronger. Beauty all around can be vague without knowing first too much what the poem was about. The title helps, but then it could be something else. I would suggest looking at a first line that can be more specific. The poem is really good with the last line appealing to the sense of smell and the middle line telling us what we see. Just something to consider for that first line.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your comment, review and personal thoughts on my poem. All mean a lot to me....xoxo
Comment from Gungalo
Beauty all around
Flowers blooming everywhere
The scent fills my heart
Wonderful write and loaded with flowers whose scent is everywhere. SIgh. Must be nice to have beauty all around.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Beauty all around
Flowers blooming everywhere
The scent fills my heart
Wonderful write and loaded with flowers whose scent is everywhere. SIgh. Must be nice to have beauty all around.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much my friend...xoxo
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Smile.
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct is the photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. The message is to the point as I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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This piece meets the criteria of the 5-7-5. The syllable count is correct is the photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. The message is to the point as I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks so much my friend.....xoxo
