Writer's Block
This just came from the love of the art.2 total reviews
Comment from zeldasmith
That is true of your 5-7-5 ....but it might be more powerful if you change the first or last line to read....use it or lose it.....a picture of may may apen to paper....and a colorful background...fit the picot the poem. Good job.
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That is true of your 5-7-5 ....but it might be more powerful if you change the first or last line to read....use it or lose it.....a picture of may may apen to paper....and a colorful background...fit the picot the poem. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
Comment from 4tun81
Welcome to fanstory. I hope you enjoy your time on this site. Your 5-7-5 is well constructed and carries advice that I am sure that most "fanstorians" follow. Good luck in the contest and thanks for posting.
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Welcome to fanstory. I hope you enjoy your time on this site. Your 5-7-5 is well constructed and carries advice that I am sure that most "fanstorians" follow. Good luck in the contest and thanks for posting.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
