Visible Flight of Invisible Might!
An invisible might drives one to a visible flight.78 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Visible Flight or Invisible Might' is a well-written and thought-provoking piece. God's power should never be underestimated. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this caliber.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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'Visible Flight or Invisible Might' is a well-written and thought-provoking piece. God's power should never be underestimated. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this caliber.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
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RPSaxena, you're more than welcome.
With my best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the line "Defeat does not consist in losing the game, but in losing one's heart." I think English is not your first language, but this is good overall.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I like the line "Defeat does not consist in losing the game, but in losing one's heart." I think English is not your first language, but this is good overall.
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Apryle Willis
I would like to start this review by adding that all the tones and splashes of blue gave this a nice feel before I ever read a word. I love nature as well. But what I love more than anything...is God. So excellent job in describing his presence in your life. Anything in honor of our redeemer and the wonders of his beauty is precious. Your friend, Apryle
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I would like to start this review by adding that all the tones and splashes of blue gave this a nice feel before I ever read a word. I love nature as well. But what I love more than anything...is God. So excellent job in describing his presence in your life. Anything in honor of our redeemer and the wonders of his beauty is precious. Your friend, Apryle
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
There is a couple of things about this poetry that I like. It is first, very positive and upbeat. I typically am the opposite, but don't enjoy reading my own stuff. Secondly, it comes from a spirit-filled heart, that I must admire and envy.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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There is a couple of things about this poetry that I like. It is first, very positive and upbeat. I typically am the opposite, but don't enjoy reading my own stuff. Secondly, it comes from a spirit-filled heart, that I must admire and envy.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Flamingbush
Invisible might: What an amazing concept. It's like the wind: you can't see it but you know it's there. I love the creative rhymes in this, especially the ones involving His might.
"In the Lord's light resides His invisible might, It guides our insight and keeps it bright." - what a delight!
The part where you state that "defeat does not consist in losing the game, but in losing one's heart, no fuel to inflame" is very powerful. Nice work.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Invisible might: What an amazing concept. It's like the wind: you can't see it but you know it's there. I love the creative rhymes in this, especially the ones involving His might.
"In the Lord's light resides His invisible might, It guides our insight and keeps it bright." - what a delight!
The part where you state that "defeat does not consist in losing the game, but in losing one's heart, no fuel to inflame" is very powerful. Nice work.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
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You're welcome. Have a blessed evening.
Flaming
Comment from PoesyPoet
This was absolutely beautiful from start to finish. What a very encouraging and very inspirational work. I liked it. Rhyming was perfect. Best of luck. cc
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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This was absolutely beautiful from start to finish. What a very encouraging and very inspirational work. I liked it. Rhyming was perfect. Best of luck. cc
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Gungalo
Never cry or feel shy, but try again and again,
Once and again try until desired aim you gain;
Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!
This is the truth and will word for anyone. Don't let yourself get caught up in the ways of the world.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Never cry or feel shy, but try again and again,
Once and again try until desired aim you gain;
Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!
This is the truth and will word for anyone. Don't let yourself get caught up in the ways of the world.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
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Smile.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. This piece has good rhyming. This piece has a smooth flow as the writer delivers a message that touches the heart of the reader. Praise His holy name.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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The writer uses the aabb rhyme scheme effectively. This piece has good rhyming. This piece has a smooth flow as the writer delivers a message that touches the heart of the reader. Praise His holy name.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Cookie333
Great message poet, for some reason today I feel Him speaking. I have read so many spiritual pieces and each with its own meaning, I am trying to figure out what He wants me to hear
Thank you
K
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Great message poet, for some reason today I feel Him speaking. I have read so many spiritual pieces and each with its own meaning, I am trying to figure out what He wants me to hear
Thank you
K
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Hi,
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Zue65
Yes, giving thanks and praise to God for all His wonderful creations,the sun,moon,stars,sky and birds and everything on earth is the ultimate proof of His invisible might. We see Him everywhere for He created it and thus, we should not fear, all these were provided by God for our dominion, for God is near and He will help us thrive, all these were emphasized in your poem.Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Yes, giving thanks and praise to God for all His wonderful creations,the sun,moon,stars,sky and birds and everything on earth is the ultimate proof of His invisible might. We see Him everywhere for He created it and thus, we should not fear, all these were provided by God for our dominion, for God is near and He will help us thrive, all these were emphasized in your poem.Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Hi,
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
