Visible Flight of Invisible Might!
An invisible might drives one to a visible flight.78 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
What an uplifting and inspiring poem. Faith is key to finding happiness. The world can be a very troubling place if we don't have a positive attitude. Lou
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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What an uplifting and inspiring poem. Faith is key to finding happiness. The world can be a very troubling place if we don't have a positive attitude. Lou
Comment Written 26-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2013
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Hi Lou,
Thanks a lot for your kind review, inspiring thoughts, morale boosting comments and sparing so much time for me!
Comment from Simple Splendors
Complete, concise, and clear. I like it.
Nice chiasmic structure to set the third stanza in the spotlight as well.
It is interesting how many people in the world would like to take the last line without the second stanza. Thank you for your completeness and for sparing me a juvenile rant about health and wealth gospel :P
Have a lovely evening, my brother!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Complete, concise, and clear. I like it.
Nice chiasmic structure to set the third stanza in the spotlight as well.
It is interesting how many people in the world would like to take the last line without the second stanza. Thank you for your completeness and for sparing me a juvenile rant about health and wealth gospel :P
Have a lovely evening, my brother!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Hi Simple Splendor,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and encouraging comments! God bless you.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Powerful faith lifter. I got the same feeling in church this morning. Our leader asked us to just observe two minutes of silence. At just that moment the clouds opened with torrential rainfall. Deep calling to deep. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Powerful faith lifter. I got the same feeling in church this morning. Our leader asked us to just observe two minutes of silence. At just that moment the clouds opened with torrential rainfall. Deep calling to deep. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2013
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Hi Jean Lutz,
Thank you very much for your nice and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is a very inspirational and well-rhymed poem. I have one edit suggestion for you: fourth line, first stanza, I think you missed the 's' here - "...in God'(s) light." Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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This is a very inspirational and well-rhymed poem. I have one edit suggestion for you: fourth line, first stanza, I think you missed the 's' here - "...in God'(s) light." Very nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi I.Dawn,
Thank you very much for bringing this thing into my notice. I've edited it accordingly.
I think ('s) got deleted at some time during my editing work.
Again, thanks a lot for your so nice and thoughtful review.
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hello RP,
I enjoyed reading your deep and thoughtful poem which aptly shares some significant philosophy. It is always interesting to hear another person's viewpoints and opinions and you did a very good job of expressing yours in this well written poem. Thanks for sharing.
Warm regards, W ^-^
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hello RP,
I enjoyed reading your deep and thoughtful poem which aptly shares some significant philosophy. It is always interesting to hear another person's viewpoints and opinions and you did a very good job of expressing yours in this well written poem. Thanks for sharing.
Warm regards, W ^-^
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi W ^-^,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments!
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Very good flow and rhyme scheme. Your love for God shines throughout the poem. I can tell you put a lot of heart into every word.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Very good flow and rhyme scheme. Your love for God shines throughout the poem. I can tell you put a lot of heart into every word.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments!
Comment from Cedar
This is a very beautiful spiritual poem. Your rhyming and flow of your words makes the poem even better. I wish you good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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This is a very beautiful spiritual poem. Your rhyming and flow of your words makes the poem even better. I wish you good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments!
Comment from MizKat
Hi RPSaxena,
I absolutely love your inspirational poem. It should go far in the Faith Poetry Contest.
It is the kind of poetry I always write, although I haven't been joining contests lately.
I really enjoyed your poem. Keep up the wonderful work. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Kat
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi RPSaxena,
I absolutely love your inspirational poem. It should go far in the Faith Poetry Contest.
It is the kind of poetry I always write, although I haven't been joining contests lately.
I really enjoyed your poem. Keep up the wonderful work. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Kat
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi Kat,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful, morale boosting comments and Good wishes!
Comment from rjuselius
beautiful piece of poetry! and a nice tribute to our lord! he surely is present in everything you do:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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beautiful piece of poetry! and a nice tribute to our lord! he surely is present in everything you do:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi Rjuselius,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful, morale boosting comments and the Good wishes with Six Stars!
I feel myself highly honored. God bless you.
Comment from Jane Johnson
Nicely written spiritual verse about God's omnipresence. Words flowed well and the artwork you chose was appropriate for the verse. Good rhyme scheme used. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Nicely written spiritual verse about God's omnipresence. Words flowed well and the artwork you chose was appropriate for the verse. Good rhyme scheme used. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments!
