I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "I Am He"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from zeldasmith
Chronic depression is a terrible malady to live with. I had it for four years and I wanted to be me again....so I can relate to this poem good job. Keep writing my friend.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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Chronic depression is a terrible malady to live with. I had it for four years and I wanted to be me again....so I can relate to this poem good job. Keep writing my friend.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013
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I left my muse in San Francisco. I am trying to find her.
Norm
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Is that the same as: I LEFT MY HEART IN SAN FRANCISCO....lol.
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You got it.
Writer's Block
Why can't I write
Like I wrote before
About dreams and screams
And loves galore
Where is the rythm
Where is the rhyme
I am stuck
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Doesn't sound like writers block to me!
Comment from theomagee5
You deserve six stars my friend. The poem was emotional and loud. I felt every verse. The occasional rhyming was on point. Bravo to you
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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You deserve six stars my friend. The poem was emotional and loud. I felt every verse. The occasional rhyming was on point. Bravo to you
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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You are the greatest. Depression is awful.
Norm
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Very soulful and honestly expressed and quite accurate.
A family member suffered from depression and attemted suicuide and many of the emotions and thoughts you have expressed he had felt too.
Well written in a fluent free-flowing style.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Very soulful and honestly expressed and quite accurate.
A family member suffered from depression and attemted suicuide and many of the emotions and thoughts you have expressed he had felt too.
Well written in a fluent free-flowing style.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the kind review. Depression is awful but I am better now.
Norm
