Comment from zeldasmith

Excellent

You described vertigo perfectly. Do you suffer from that? I hope not. The picture is awesome too. And the layout is good. Good job my friend. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for the kind review. I have had depression for years and vertigo just as long. I have run out of old poems.

Norm

reply by zeldasmith on 10-Jul-2013

Oh my you poor child no wonder you're depressed. Have you sought medical attention?

reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

There is no cure but I am ok with everything. It is what it is. What's sad is that there are no more poems worthy enough to post. Some how I need to write again.

Norm

reply by zeldasmith on 10-Jul-2013

The best way to get started is start. Now go to it, Peace.

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2013

I just listed my last poem from my oldies. I need new ones. It is a great subject but a poor poem.

You are the greatest.

Norm

Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

This is excellent writing and the line breaks are perfect and the words well crafted. I don't know what it is to be depressed but it must be awful.
Good work
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Depression is awful. I am better now.

Norm

Comment from RedMarie33

Excellent

Wow...powerful poem. I don't have tinnitus but I have suffered from vertigo since getting a mild concussion, so I know what that's like and you did a good job of describing the sensations, as well as the mental confusion and anguish that comes along with not being able to operate normally with those physical challenges.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Being sick is no fun. Thanks for the kind review.

Norm