Comment from rouskin

Excellent

I loved it all, but especially these parts:

a sky with very tight blue jeans

high to that golden carriage
of her majesty the sun

Very well done

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great week, Ine

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

This is very interesting and makes one want to go out and play in the sun. Very nice picture for the poem. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

On a great summer day, the kites are flying, the skies as blue as the bluest jeans and the hot air balloon flies so free and wild along the skies to see the great summer day's activities below.
Good write and express the happiness to be witness on a sunny summer day with the wind blowing.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine

reply by 9999pool on 11-Jul-2013

You too, sister.
Cheerio, hugs, bro Ritchie.

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Love this jaunty and spirted summer day poem...
especially your description ...'a sky with very tight
blue jeans'... most creative indeed enhancing the
entire mood and flow. Thanks for sharing...
Best always...Ronni

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

This poem has an endless feel of freedom as the balloon in the picture gives that feeling. Nice flow, fits perfectly together. Love the last three lines. Great job! Les

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from Kingsland

Exceptional

I liked this poem, as it resonated summer to me in every fashion. This was just a great piece of poetic art to have read and responded to. So here's six stars for you ******
John

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine. Thanks ever so much John for this lovely rating.

Comment from wordsareus

Excellent

Summer days are lovely and have so much to show. I love watching hot air balloons floating through the air. A delightful read.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Exceptional

Very creative, Ine. I just love the description of the sky in tight blue jeans, and her majesty the sun in a golden carriage.

Wonderful analogies. Well done.

Av

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine. Thanks ever so much for this lovely six.

Comment from amarherig14

Excellent

Happy summertime poem with good imagery,words and the perfect picture to send your message on.I like your personification of the sun.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine

reply by amarherig14 on 09-Jul-2013

You are welcome,Ine. Nice poem you wrote. Margie:)))

Comment from Joan E.

Exceptional

I really enjoyed the mood you quickly created with your use of repetition, an original image with the "blue jeans" and "golden carriage" metaphor. Well done! -Joan

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your time and the nice rating. Have a lovely week , Ine. Thanks for this high rating.