Comment from lorijean

Excellent

Beautifully written poem, it just bounces off the page and was a pleasure to read, loved the artwork and thank you for sharing.....

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Thank you for the wonderful review.

Comment from Bayberry

Excellent

This is a beautiful palindrome that is upbeat and a good way to start the morning. The presentation is also attractive and attention-getting. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thank you very much. This is a very difficult form, but I love challenges!

Comment from Matthew M.

Excellent

Normally palindromes are words that are written backwards, spell the same thing, but this poem has words that written reversed say the poem the same way. It is good both forwards and backwards.

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thank you very much. Yes, palindromes can be words; in this contest they want them as sentences.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Bravo what a great palindrome. They are harder than they seem. But you did this magnificently.
I like the alliteration and the picture is cool too.
Well done
God bless

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thank you, Jenny, for the great review. It's a difficult form, and was a bit daunting, but I love challenges!