Love Instills Life
a Palindrome54 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Very good with the Palindrome. You have done it girl and it's very aesthetically pleasing too. I wonder though if you turn word should be a palindome too: become.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Very good with the Palindrome. You have done it girl and it's very aesthetically pleasing too. I wonder though if you turn word should be a palindome too: become.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your great review, my island goddess. A palindrome is good to add to your resume (lol). That form is dizzy.
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Dizzy is right girl. LOL
Comment from sibhus
What beautiful tender thoughts you have created with your words. I know it's just a silly pop-song, but I thing the Beetles were right when they song "All we need is love".
Such a clever way you have put this all together in a palindrome.
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What beautiful tender thoughts you have created with your words. I know it's just a silly pop-song, but I thing the Beetles were right when they song "All we need is love".
Such a clever way you have put this all together in a palindrome.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from N.K. Wagner
An excellent palindrome poem, yeltel. Your descriptions of lovers and their emotions and interactions reads beautifully in both directions. :) nancy
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An excellent palindrome poem, yeltel. Your descriptions of lovers and their emotions and interactions reads beautifully in both directions. :) nancy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from Ridley Williams
You can say it forwards or backwards, but the message still comes through loud and clear. Love has powers to bring peace and happiness, which may lead to fulfillment. Thank you for such a thoughtful piece, Ridley
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You can say it forwards or backwards, but the message still comes through loud and clear. Love has powers to bring peace and happiness, which may lead to fulfillment. Thank you for such a thoughtful piece, Ridley
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from GWHARGIS
The poem was lovely. Your message read beautifully. I liked the use of the word instills. It is just different enough to give multiple meanings. Nice flow and the rhythm was great. nice job.
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The poem was lovely. Your message read beautifully. I liked the use of the word instills. It is just different enough to give multiple meanings. Nice flow and the rhythm was great. nice job.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from Paul Sienicki
Something different, I like it. The relationality and interdependence of love and life superbly articulated here. Especially, 'seeded sensations' produce more of the same kind, very well embellished. Yes, love engenders love. Beautiful.
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Something different, I like it. The relationality and interdependence of love and life superbly articulated here. Especially, 'seeded sensations' produce more of the same kind, very well embellished. Yes, love engenders love. Beautiful.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from kiwisteveh
I gave some thought to entering this contest but gave up - too hard.
You have done a good job of creating a happy, joyful atmosphere and instilling a strong message of the importance of love.
Steve
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I gave some thought to entering this contest but gave up - too hard.
You have done a good job of creating a happy, joyful atmosphere and instilling a strong message of the importance of love.
Steve
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
You have created a perfect palindrome with some lovely words. I particularly like 'smiling inwardly' that is very nice. The whole of your palindrome centres round the theme of love and I like it very much. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
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You have created a perfect palindrome with some lovely words. I particularly like 'smiling inwardly' that is very nice. The whole of your palindrome centres round the theme of love and I like it very much. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry uses descriptive words to paint a colorful
and vivid piece. I like the way that the words are
arranged on the page. The attached photo is a nice
accent that enhances the message. Thank You for your
creation.
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This poetry uses descriptive words to paint a colorful
and vivid piece. I like the way that the words are
arranged on the page. The attached photo is a nice
accent that enhances the message. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2013
Comment from Dean Kuch
This beautifully unique style, this...palindrome is so wonderful if it's done properly. Believe me when I say this, YOU have done it so proud with this contest entry. Your impeccable, bright, nearly fluorescent presentation, coupled with a verse that is as well stated forward, as it is in reverse, is purely a wonderful piece of poetic art. I have no other ways with which to describe it but that...
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This beautifully unique style, this...palindrome is so wonderful if it's done properly. Believe me when I say this, YOU have done it so proud with this contest entry. Your impeccable, bright, nearly fluorescent presentation, coupled with a verse that is as well stated forward, as it is in reverse, is purely a wonderful piece of poetic art. I have no other ways with which to describe it but that...
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
