Shadows of a Secret
A young woman struggling with depression2 total reviews
Comment from zeldasmith
Depression is so rampant. Society has yet to recognize it as a disease such as diabetes. There's one in every family along their line. Old time family members would rather push mental illness under the carpet and wish it away. Sad. Your poem says a lot. Good job. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Depression is so rampant. Society has yet to recognize it as a disease such as diabetes. There's one in every family along their line. Old time family members would rather push mental illness under the carpet and wish it away. Sad. Your poem says a lot. Good job. Keep writing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your review and I really appreciate the compliment. I would appreciate it if you would review future pieces that I may create. And again thank you.
Comment from Adri7enne
"Her glass mind SHATTER" SHATTERS.
Good syllable count and a sad situation presented. Must be frightening and sad to see someone get to that point. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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"Her glass mind SHATTER" SHATTERS.
Good syllable count and a sad situation presented. Must be frightening and sad to see someone get to that point. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your review and I really appreciate the compliment. I would appreciate it if you would review future pieces that I may create. And again thank you.
