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Grief brings Relief

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Comment from JM daSilva
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Yeah, all psychologists say denial is one of the biggest problems patients face on the road to recovery. We all have to admit a problem, never running away from it.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    How true. Without our hangups, the psychiatric profession would be unemployed. Thanks for your review~Debbie
reply by JM daSilva on 06-Jul-2013
    No doubt. :)
Comment from angelmagnet
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Debbie, have you read Kubler Ross - I forget her first name, but she has a masterpiece on grief and grieving. I hope you're not offended by my comments. I felt that the power behind this verse was so real that I felt I needed to address that before I told you what a good write this is. Good luck, Cindy

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    She has a wonderful bieof grief and knowing what to expect and why this is happening, is so very useful. Have a wonderful evening~De
Comment from Darkhorse555
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from the picture of colours burning upon the fire in the softness of your words dressed in its dark attire you penned a n excellent piece

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review. It is greatly appreciated
Comment from dmt1967
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Some people do hide their feelings my friend but we all need to feel to grieve and we all need to grieve to move on great write thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    Thanks. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
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Self-honesty allows
The grieving process
To proceed
As is appropriate
And without the harm done
By denial of true feelings

Then by all means, go through the process girlie. It's far better than hurting indefinitely. Sigh.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    That's for sure. Best to get it over with and go on. Thanks :) Deb
reply by Gungalo on 06-Jul-2013
    Smile.
Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer does a good job of delivering a message that is easy to understand and touches the heart of the reader. The title has a nice ring to it and catches my ear but the words hold my attention from beginning to end. Good job.

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am pretty sure if we admit our feelings things will always eventually get better. Sometimes it's rocky, but truth is always best. I enjoyed reading your poem.

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2013
    I think so too. Thank you so very much~Debbie